When I read Zamiel talking to the changlings I thought of Kane's speech to Legion in this begins at 1:20

this has to be played when Zamiel fights Celestia

2265427 And what about this at the beginning of the battle when he works his way up to her?

2265805 It's perfect my good sir

2266114>>2265805 There is allways this:

2268068 And like that youve made me angry frustrated and famishly hungry for cupcakes your sick F***

2268809 just get me to the bedroom, I promise you won't be hungry, Angry or Frustrated at all.

2269292 that sounds.... nice...

2270332 Don't worry, i'm just a tease. ....unless you wanted it.

2272772 only time will tell *wink wink*

2272772>>2273613 I wanna say: "back off, Jackie's mine", but I think he already know's that I own him. Very well, Jackie; go and play. Just remember where your loyalties lie.

2274404 Oh sweet!! You wont regret this grimm *evil laughter* you wont regret this at all ...

2274420>>2274404 Yay, Thank you grimm. I promise I'll take VERY good care of him. Ohhhh Viper.... time for round 1. And don't worry, you'll always be my Angel of Death. If you want when I'm done with viper, i'll show you where my loyalties lie. *Bedroom Eyes*

2277379 This gon be a long night *teehee* show me how you buck jacker...Show.Me.How.You.Buuuuuck. *sultry look*

2277379>>2277678

2277379 i knew i heard that song before, god damned cupcakes video.

2277896 Catchy tune thou.

2278233 I wonder if I should have Zamiel's voice changed? I know we don't know what it's like now, but as a Changeling Hybrid, he should sound cool. How about Megatron from Transformers?

2278238 Salron. Salron From LOTR

2278422

2278446 Seee. That's scary.

2278467 But so is this:

2278476 OHHH THAT megatron, I was thinking of the animated one. What about a mixture, When he is in battle armor its S but normal its M?

“I’m thinking Zamiel.” I said as the two mares failed to produce any meaningful name whatsoever.

“And what about this second name; Alcatraz? What does that word signify?” Luna asked. I turned to her and kept my smile as it was.

you need to add the second name in the first sentance otherwise they're procuring the name out of nowhere

2278484 Sounds good to me. S&M it is, lol.

2278694>>2277678 .....Darling, don't start something you don't want me to finish. Cause the stuff I could do, Will leave you bed-ridden.

2277869>>2278882 Oh? you don't wanna... it's ok... grimmy you can have ol jackie back jackie don wanna have fun with me

2278901 Honey, I never said that, all I said was a warning, now if you really want it, come here. I'll make it all better. fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/078/b/6/applejack_in_stockings_by_up1ter-d4t98tq.png

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When will the next chapter come out?!

2307625 Not sure. I'm still thinking of training methods for the Changelings.

This OC is the most OCest OC I've ever OC'd.

2353562 That's nice!

2354051

Seriously.
Alternate universe where Mane 6 are evil? ✓
Rough, ex-vet human magically teleported to equestria where he's repressed? ✓
Allies with canon bad guy female who gets raped? ✓
Potential for sex but gallantly declines rape, gaining trust and support of would be victim? ✓
Frequently expressed how superior he is to ponies? ✓
"I don't give a shit" attitude coupled with insane physical prowess? ✓
Named Zamiel Alcatraz? ✓ (I know this was chosen by readers. It's still silly)
Every fucking power he ever gets? ✓
Let me play you the song of my people

2422262 the former; 10% of total strength. If I were to have it the other way, I'd have said 'reduced by a tenth'.

Not a romance?

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Badass armor to the left

The first thing most people look at is the cover image. I almost flipped my shit at another prototype crossover to read. But this shall have to suffice... For nao.

2532035 I fucking love it.

Waiting for the inevitable backwards somersault-kick when someone gets all up in his face

Dear god do not tell me this was dropped, or the tears I will produce would make the tears brought on by My Little Dashie NOTHING!

2696036 This story hasn't been dropped.

2697430 If done right, it could be both.

2935345 fixed. I think that's the right song.

Is it just me or am I feeling like he should pull a Mercer and just say "fuck everything" and just try to create the Mercer Virus..... And kill every last pony except for the rebels.

Why does it have Alex Mercer as coverart if it's not a prototype crossover?