What happens after death? Philosophers, theologians, and scientists have argued this for thousands of years. It is truly the final frontier. But what if your death was interrupted? You were going to die, but then you woke up elsewhere. Bearing a new body in a foreign world. A world of light, happiness, friendship, and love. But a world that held a dark secret, a curtain pulled over the general public to hide the truth. That the world is cruel, unyielding, and heartless.
This is his story, the story of a man who woke up in this new foreign land. The friendships he formed, the rivalries he challenged, and the hardships he endured. All to stay alive, be with the one he loved, and hopefully make the world a better place. This is the story of The Equestria Key.
Since this is a re-write, would you like me to help you go over this as a pre-reader/editor? I really like this story so far and I think an extra pair of eyes looking for errors would be useful
Yeah sure I'll add you to my list of pre-readers.
I think I remember reading your old version of this story, and now is fairly moe awesome and well descripted, curious to see if you will stick close to the old one.
Good work
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One of his editors here. Yeah, he's sticking rather close to his original storyline, with the revisions mostly in the pacing and general quality. The actual storyline was one of the things that didn't need any changes, outside of fixing a couple continuity errors.