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Shadow Wolf
I am just a simple writer and brony doing simple things. Story telling has become my hobby and (un)paid job. When I'm not busy and have free time, I'm a gamer on the side. Also referred to as Inrei
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Well f*** me, this was intense! I loved it and I'm so happy to see this!
So Alicorn Twilight, huh? I'm okay with that and can't wait to see who is that 'him'. Though I have a good guess about that and that last line... damn this is exiting!
Also, I spotted some grammar errors. Missing words and saw some sentences, where you wanted to write something down in two different ways.
But nothing that makes the story bad and unable to read.
Now I just have to wait...
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I'll try to find these errors and fix them.
In order to make sure this fic passed moderation, I had to do a lot of changes with the second chapter, and what I ended up doing was actually take parts from what would have been in the third chapter and merged it with the one you read.
But in the end, I'm glad that you are enjoying this story so far.
GASP, IS THIS A DARK-HUNTER CROSSOVER I SEE???
Edit: Fuck. I saw 'Atlantean' and names from ancient cultures, so I got excited. You need an editor.
This is great! Loving the backstory so far; can't wait for more!
Nice thumbs up err i mean hooves up
Not bad. It's interesting to see "Princess" Twilight Sparkle in this. Looking forward to see where this is going.
2155014 Being honest, I'm not familiar with Dark-Hunter (had to look it up since this is actually the first time I heard that title
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When I uploaded this fic, I ended up having to merge some of chapter 3 with 2 so I could pass moderation. If you or anyone else who reads this comment can help pinpoint some of the errors, that would be a big help for me when I fix the problems.
Damn, you had to go and get my hopes up with the cover art. here I was hoping it was a stargate crossover. Oh well. either way it's still good work.
Interesting story you have here
Looking forward to new chapters
Holy fucking shit! I knew it was him! Hohho, this won't turn out well!
Also... Rainbow's speech about sex is really effective... just saying...
well this is going to be awkward
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Well, look who the fuck it is.
It's motherfucking Inrei.
Feast your eyes upon his super-OP Gary Stu-ness (referring of course to 'My Little Shit-' I mean 'Sinner')
Down to business. Should I read this or should I simply move on and try to forget that you exist? Honestly, I would like to give this a try, but first I think the author should tell me whether he thinks I would like it or not before attempting to read this.
wow Rainbow, you just showed him a practically exact copy of who destroyed his birthworld, wonder whats gonna happen next
2472515 I'm not sure what type of genre you enjoy when it comes to stories, so ultimately the choice to read this fic is completely yours. Yes this is a sequel to MLS, but our simple human turned pony Yvel is the main protagonist, so Inrei's powers are going to be kept at a minimal. I'm only thinking of doing one chapter that shows Inrei's full potential.
I enjoyed MLS, but I really hope that you don't put in a fight scene every two or three chapters. I understand wanting some action (trust me, it's awesome) but sometimes it is a little too much.
Favorited and awaiting a new chapter.
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I know that feeling, a good fight scene can be enjoyable to watch or read, but too many of them can negatively affect the story for both the reader and writer. With MLS, one of the major reasons why I had that many fight scens being that close was to show how violent Inrei's life became even though he was trying to transition it into a peaceful one. Now that The Atlantean is taking place in the Sinner storyline, this is taking place after Inrei and Reiku's war with a new main character trying cope with the incident that has become of him. The amount of fight scenes I'm planning for this story are next to none.
hmmm does that mean Atlantians are thieves
The wait was totally worth it!
I still have my speculations about Inrei being guilty for what he had done to his home, though. Either he is playing along or can't remember what he did thousands of years ago.
But maybe you're just going to shoot down my guesses and he will turn out to be not the one who brought devastation upon his home...
Have a nice day!
~Adam
Holy spaceships!!! First chapter is intense! Loving it already
There is a BIG mistake in this chapter. Applejack wears a 'Stetson', not a 'fedora'.
Yvel doesn't know that he is actually closer to home than he thinks... because it is in Inrei's digestive tract!!!
Where's the resentment? The anger? The complete and utter need to avenge his people or die trying?! This is just blasphemy!!!
Great story though!
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