So Alicorn Twilight, huh? I'm okay with that and can't wait to see who is that 'him'. Though I have a good guess about that and that last line... damn this is exiting!
Also, I spotted some grammar errors. Missing words and saw some sentences, where you wanted to write something down in two different ways. But nothing that makes the story bad and unable to read.
2152484 In order to make sure this fic passed moderation, I had to do a lot of changes with the second chapter, and what I ended up doing was actually take parts from what would have been in the third chapter and merged it with the one you read. I'll try to find these errors and fix them.
But in the end, I'm glad that you are enjoying this story so far.
2155014 Being honest, I'm not familiar with Dark-Hunter (had to look it up since this is actually the first time I heard that title )
When I uploaded this fic, I ended up having to merge some of chapter 3 with 2 so I could pass moderation. If you or anyone else who reads this comment can help pinpoint some of the errors, that would be a big help for me when I fix the problems.
So Alicorn Twilight, huh? I'm okay with that and can't wait to see who is that 'him'. Though I have a good guess about that and that last line... damn this is exiting!
Also, I spotted some grammar errors. Missing words and saw some sentences, where you wanted to write something down in two different ways.
But nothing that makes the story bad and unable to read.
Now I just have to wait...
2152484
In order to make sure this fic passed moderation, I had to do a lot of changes with the second chapter, and what I ended up doing was actually take parts from what would have been in the third chapter and merged it with the one you read. I'll try to find these errors and fix them.
But in the end, I'm glad that you are enjoying this story so far.
This is great! Loving the backstory so far; can't wait for more!
Nice thumbs up err i mean hooves up
Not bad. It's interesting to see "Princess" Twilight Sparkle in this. Looking forward to see where this is going.
2155014 Being honest, I'm not familiar with Dark-Hunter (had to look it up since this is actually the first time I heard that title )
When I uploaded this fic, I ended up having to merge some of chapter 3 with 2 so I could pass moderation. If you or anyone else who reads this comment can help pinpoint some of the errors, that would be a big help for me when I fix the problems.
Damn, you had to go and get my hopes up with the cover art. here I was hoping it was a stargate crossover. Oh well. either way it's still good work.
Interesting story you have here
Looking forward to new chapters
There is a BIG mistake in this chapter. Applejack wears a 'Stetson', not a 'fedora'.