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something?
Yeah something.........first I guess....shall read now.....First, just saying.XD
Damn, I'm not even sure what this is all about.
......
Oh Lance, I'm sorry, but you are so DEAD!
*continues laughing*
Lol the cliffhanger.
LOLL
and also
looking forward to nightmare night, for many reasons, let me go through them for you
itwillbesofuncuzimi9ghtenterandimightevenscarethehelloutofyouandmaybeicouldactuallymakefriendsandnothavetohaveponyvillechasemeoutbecauseimanomnivoreponyorjustcauseimaforeignponyeitherwaythisnightmarenightchapterwillbesoFRIGGENFUN
Whoa, second... Awesomeness, great chapter
So much win, Lance, so much win.
O_o Lance, are you trying to write a death wish? You got the chance to impress Twilight's parents but now they are going to hate you forever! WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH THIS PLACE?!
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AH YEEAHHH LANCE........making Twilights parents suprised and maybe now scared since they think that there daughter married a lunatic LIKE A BOSS!!!!!!!
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Omg! When I read when he jumped into the puddle I LOLE'D SO HARD!!!! espacialy when he started acting like a kid
also
SECOND BEEEYYYAAACCCHHH
Laughed my ass clean off.
*clears throat*
But, seriously. I believe that Lance will show just how much he loves Twilight and her parents will accept him. After all, he did literally die for her. If that isn't the sign of a good husband, I don't know what is.
YES YES!! Perfect oh yes
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Lance. U so silly.
fuckin' lol
im gonna find it funny when twilight dies of embarrassment of what her parents are gonna think
Lance i know how u feel.
I hate putting on suits all tight and everything.
Whats the purpose of suits anyway cant we just where regular clothes.
or for ponies no clothes at all.
If someone forced me to where a suit i would just run then belly flop into a puddle of mud or role around in grass or just keep running until they tire out.
Until they cant take it any more and give up
Lance you just screwed and fucked yourself at the same time, for doing that stunt in front of Twilight's parents, and also dont forget about Twilight's brother, Shining armor.
HAHAHAHA. Lance you're fucked. And not in the good way
Wowie! I loved this chapter! That song! I remember it from 'Three of Me: School Society'! Mad Twilight is mad!
*resentful sigh*
Way back when I looked at the first chapter, I thought to myself as to how you could improve as an author. Better descriptive talent, more of an idea of what was going on, less solid speech conversations ect ect. I decided that it was perhaps a lost cause and you were too far down to even attempt to gain a decent writing foothold so I turned away and went about my business. I come back ages later and you have the same, sadly not all that great, writing and have the most commented on story on the site.
Maybe it's just the incompetent fools writing (see: randomly mashing the keyboard in a vain hope it makes sense) about how epic it was with no actual input. For example, see item one.
Several words spelled incorrectly and little to no merit to it at all.
Perhaps I should review the followers as opposed to the story. I'm not attempting to be the judge dread here, nor am I saying my own writings are any better or worse. You have a good thing, I assume you enjoy the attention as much as anyone including I would but the problem is...well...the story is just not any good. It pains me to see and say this time and time again, but I just don't understand. Would some of the follower base care to spam me with thousands of hat- enlighten me as to why it is so good because apparently I'm thick as a frozen concrete milkshake topped with molasses and cannot comprehend the sheer awesome being extruded here.
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Shortly after that Twilight killed you
THE END
wasn't that a nice read guys
They think that's bad, just wait until they find out Lance was originally from a different dimension!
"LAUGHS HYSTERICALLY" Oh god that made my day, "Snort" i bet Twilight parents are gonna freak out, especially if their like Twilight. Can't wait to see what happens.
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445959
it's not perfect, but it's not really that bad... yeah, i explained that pathetically, i suppose some people like it and others don't
OOOOHHH MAI FUCKING GOD! MY LUNGS ARNT LISTINING TO ME!
Lance is the ultimate troll
I want to be him
445959 If you don't like the story....FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No one told you to read it, and no one asked for your input
I swear this entire chapter was one big spongebob reference...
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This was awesome, mouth hurts from smiling and me holding my mouth so that it wouldnt stretch to the points of ripping off my face while smiling.
445951 How can you screw and fuck urself exactly?
445974 Yes, yes it was. Best story eber! of all time!
446012 Gary for the win! [Or rather splash]
446024 I dont know how, but Lance achieved it.
446011 The comment system is here for a reason (to critique stories and provide useful ideas, along with the odd chance to freely converse here and there), if you don't like it bitch to Knighty. I'm sure he'll remove the ability to freely state one's opinion on someone's story.
446024 And after that Lance will see in his bionic eye
CONTINUE?
Yes/No
Sadly Break will obviously choose "Yes" and screws around enough for Twilight to kill him again
Remember, he's there until Twi dies so it's like a game of Contra, enough lives to reach the end
*laughing so hard he can't breath*
*collapses from lack of air*
Oh god my sides funniest chapter in a while dude. Just goes to show how being in touch with your inner child can be so fun!
445959 Gladly mate,
I think that one of the main reasons people like his story could be how it's fanbase can give ideas with the story, e.g. One chapter long story ideas, plot arcs, suggesting their own OC to be added to the story etc.
Another draw might be of the premise from how the story starts with the rapture and end of the world concept can seem likely, and with this belief, are drawn to the story.
Could be that some like the author's writing style of really (And I mean REALLY) short paragraphs makes the story easier to read.
These three suggestions might not be everyone's reason that they like reading the story (Points I could think of at 3am) but they seem like reasons people like reading this story
446038 Well your opinion did not need to be stated, if you don't like it, you dont have to tell everyone, if I dont like a story I just drop it and move on , simple as that, I don't tell the author he's bad at writing or criticize his story.
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Err... Equestria.
TUXEDOOOOOOO MAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!!
445959 *How do I put this?*
The way Kickass222urmom writes his story does seem a bit basic, but I think it's the emotion he puts into each chapter. He can have a funny chapter that makes everyone laugh, then turn the next one into a serious matter where everyone is interested in a way that makes sense. I think it also helps that characters added into this are based off actual users who add their individuality into the story. I personally enjoy this story and I can't wait for what happens next.
*I don't know if this helps or not, but this is my opinion on the matter.*
Trolololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololo!!!!!!!!
446034 Man I would love to have him unlock some achievements on my PS3 for me. He can achieve anything!
446042 Quick get the green mushrooms! [I hear they are apple flavored. ]
446061 But he wasn't just stating that he didn't like the story, he was also asking if people coul tell him reasons why they like this story. Plus, people are allow to critize, as it allows the person being critized to see where their faults are and improve on these.
Even if people don't have a positive thing to say about someone else's creation, they are allowed I speak their mind in the way they deem appropriate, and the comments sections is what is deemed appropriate to speak their mind about how they feel about the story.
446061
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I'm attempting to argue with idiots, I should know better.
"To argue with idiots is impossible, they will drag you down to their level and beat you with sheer experience." Is a good way of putting it.
Have fun with that, I'm going to back away slowly and hope you don't maul me to death with abject insipidity.
446092 I gotcha covered *opens a tear to reveal a ton of 1-ups
Mario kept giving me these, even though I clearly can't die
You all can help yourselves though
I got- *looks into tear
1...3...56....233.....644....747- Um let's say a shitload, is that good enough of a number?
Oh well
446092 I know, I want him to help me unlock a lot of things on my Xbox