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You joke now, but this is only the beginning. Scamp's gonna lose all her legs and she'll become half mare half wheelchair.
And too bad Mallogory's arm is still in Leem's stomach. Her arm bones would have made a sick weapon.
Sometimes you just need to spit it out. Lance would have just hid it until it was too late.
This is a bit of an odd situation. Everybody wants to take that chance to save Scamp, but old man Lance doesn't want to risk it. It's like everybody swapped stances.
It can't be healed because the scars are now considered the default. It sucks but it's better than dying.
That's gonna be fun to read. Some nice feel good stuff after all the recent violence.
Lorenzo must really hate lesbians (And Zane). I think the only one we have left is Celestia.
* I have two pieces of art today
The first is me messing with Sparks design.
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And the second is a pic of Leem
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I'm trying not to go down the Blackjack cybermare route here, just Scamp keeps getting into situations that deem a leg sacrifice XD
Exactly. Lance likes to put things off to deal with later.
I may have not done as good of writing that as I thought XD I was trying to have it come across that after seeing his friends die because they trusted the beacon, he no longer wanted to risk it. While everyone else, especially after learning Scamp was Adry's alternate daughter, changed their mind on the matter.
That's exactly it!
The following chapters will be a cool down period in a way. Get some talking and scenes worked out. Now to build towards that epic climax!
I did not realize I just did that! Looking back, that feels targeted now. That does not help the image of this story at all Well, coming chapters should make up for that.
My God, you made Spark actually not trash. XD I'll say this, mane styles can change, luckily. So I may have him redesigned for his teenage form later in the story.
That's extremely close to how I've always pictured Leem! Oh shit! Always with the alligator style head and tail! Yes!
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I may have worded my statement badly. I knew exactly what you were going for. I was just saying that through out most of the story Lance has been portrayed as a guy who will save anyone, like Cody for example. But now he's much more grizzled and wary after recent events.
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Oh! I was thinking of short term, as in recent chapters. But with the context of the whole story, I see what you were actually say! XD
I’ll tell you this, it’s fun writing for a more mature and experienced Lance. Sure he’s still the Lance we all know, but he’s changed in certain ways that show through his protective shell.