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FIRST! booya beat that
I hold the mighty twin swords of FIRST
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SECOND OHH YEAH i SHALL get first next time
third
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4th
meh
...ow. that's gotta hurt physically and emotionally. not to mention psycologically. i mean, he just had parts of him forcibly removed to be put into someoe else, then got beat half to hell by Nightmare, then he lost his wing.
Lance getting his ass kicked like FUCK......damn
-looks up at chapter list, not to mention amount of comment pages-
"By the Gods..."
Now -that- is impressive.
If you're feeling like it, you could read a bit of my fanfic and give a bit of feedback on it...I know that this will take me a few months to get into, so...no rush...
505156 Um fourth beat first?
*breathing heavily*
It's over? That's good. I'm sorry about your wing Lance. Isn't there something they can do to reattach it or at least get/regenerate a new one?
9th.......
P.S thanks for keeping me up bro
Lance is gonna be a cyborg angel at this rate. His awesome level alone would kill enemies! Any bets on when "Nightmare" breaks out?
12TH!!
505211
Sure, I'll check out your story tonight in my free time. I hope you enjoy my story.
505191
XD Lance may have increased in power, but when he's unfocused, like he was when Nightmare threw Twilight at him, he's not as strong. Yeah, Lance's luck isn't looking so good right now
second bitches!
Epic. Also, nice to see Shadow do some damage, even if he regenerated.
505220 Way to go, You nailed Nightmare
505245 Lol nope.
sorry iron but when i read the part where you dropped richard into the lava i immediately thought of that one castle crashers boss kill in the volcano area
505215 In order yes, but not in a competition and besides what weapon do you have?
I am reminded more and more of those animes that have a supposedly extremely powerful... something, that is then outclassed. Then that's outclassed. Then THAT'S outclassed, and so on and so forth forever.
505244 can you check out mine sometime too? When you are not busy with anything
Hot damn. Amazing, and surprisingly that song was perfect. Can't wait to see what happens next.
505244
Thanks :D. Also, I should note, Its in the middle of a bit of editing, the first 5 chapters have gone through preliminary scans but the other 2 have yet to been fully reviewed, but that's assuming you get that far
505270 My weapon is the M16 of 12thiness!
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505244 Check mine out, see if you like.... you don't have to though.
505280 Touche
505220 Man...you are BAD. ASS. No one other than Lance and maybe Omnius could TOUCH Nightmare, and you broke his body...at least twice. Respect is neded for that.
There's an Aesop here:
Never be a bad guy, unless you want your ass handed to you on a silver platter
505277
No problem
I should also tell you, while you're reading my story, you'll notice a lot of grammar mistakes in the very beginning. Just overlook them, because they improve over time.
505273
Sure thing buddy
505288 Stay back!!! I will shoot!!
*cyber moves closer*
*Le me tries to shoot*
Dang! Forgot I had hooves well it's time to use a Shout.
FUS RO DAH!!
*cyber flies back*
*Run Away*
505290 Thanks, but I just wanted to help Lance out. I want to be able to help and protect all my friends and of course Fluttershy.
505300
I noticed that a bit, also I made the mistake of skipping a few lines in the first chapter (Its a habit I've gained from reading books with super-descriptions that just kinda happens while I read and my brain normally fills in the blanks) And I went from "Nah it won't happen" Down to "Go to heaven or straight to hell" And then I was like so I went back and re-read it and I was like 'well that happened quickly.'
505270 A pen. Becuz u know what they say. The pen is mightier than the sword.
HELL YEAH NIGHTMARE DEFEATED
THROUGH THE POWER OF FUCKING FRIENDSHIP MUTHA FUKA
505300 So, I'm guessing GOD would notice if one of his angels lost most of his powers. Will we be seeing GOD again to have him give Lance his powers back?
I can see why this story is so popular. You listen to your community and i think that is what drew people in to your story. (Why cant i be popular like you )
505328 defeated but not destroyed. he has only been sealed away.
505300
505341 that is true but then we dont need to see the deity "GOD" for lance to get his holy powers back. there are other deities out there ;D
505306 WIMP! *I yell as I picked myself up from the ground* and that's is why I don't use guns, cause we have no fingers
505318
Same here.
Also beware, the first fifteen chapters are kinda fast paced, because I didn't actually expect to write this much. It was only suppose to be about a twenty chapter story
505286
I'll read it when I can
505223 Please don't jinx it. I don't think we could handle another Nightmare attack. He's sealed away and let's make sure he stays that way.
hot problem remix don't listen to original
505323 Touche
505355 Like Gaia? How could she get him holy powers?
505360 I agree with you as well
Wait...since Lance killed Violent Inferno, does that mean Peter has now lost that form?
505372 well yes but that wasnt who i was talking about
505372 and in theory i guess im still wrong. a "holy" deity would give holy powers in the same ways a fire deity would give fire powers
505385 Well, who knows. If Gaia did help, you would be challenged for the dominant plant pony!