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The strongest guy just got knocked right out the gate. And all the other decent fighters are either dead or elsewhere. This can't be good.
The Lance Greenfield curse of losing fights continues.
Interesting choice to make Domitor the pov for this fight. It makes it more dramatic as he and Floria will have to struggle against all of Shayla's boosts. If this was Shayla's pov Dom would be seen as just annoying.
Ugh right in the middle of the street. Complete psycho.
He really didn't think that they would turn on him. It's like he can't comprehend the concept of being a decent person.
Even if Dom wasn't there someone else would have stepped in. Like the people would poke their heads out of their window and bullets would rain down like a storm. The world is crazy but most people are still good at their core.
Good riddance. Nasty, nasty character. He will not be missed.
This does bring up a question. What will happen to his soul? Will he go to Scarabedlam's afterlife or does God have claim on his soul? Either way it won't be a good time.
This is by far the most traumatic moment of her life... so far. She won't be ready to talk for a while. I'd imagine she would run to the only other safe place here, her grandparents.
At least she might realize that Dom isn't as awful as she thought. That might take a while though.
Killing Lenrick is by far the most good thing he has done.
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It's the smartest move to be honest, take out the strongest guy so the others don't stand a chance.
I struggled with deciding on who's POV to follow, but decided on them since they were going to b struggling more against her. If we were in her POV, she'd probably been a bit smug in her internal dialogue all the way up to Lenrick arriving. And I did not want to write her thoughts as that was happening.
Yep, a depraved man with no care for others.
He thought they were in his back pocket, and he did consider Domitor a friend. So to see him turn on him threw him for a loop.
But yes, someone would have jumped in eventually.
As for his soul, who knows where it'll go? In the Eternal Plain's, Enforcer's souls go to their repsective afterlife, while others who die in different dimensions get stuck there. Since Lenrick isn't an Enforcer, it's possible he'll go to this dimensions afterlife.
Oh yeah, this was a wake up call for her. As for where she's going, I don't know. SHe's not very open with others and has trouble talking about her problems and feelings, so we'll have to see.
Oh 100% yes it is, but he's still screwed up about it
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Then it's likely that he ends up in Yhumus. The afterlife here usually has pretty lenient standards, but the Gastwyrms will notice that his soul is far different than the standard one. So it would be under a lot more scrutiny. Then they would notice that he died trying to rape someone, in which they respond by sending him to this world's version of hell, Colcarr.
He's going to be spending a long time having his soul dissected for research, and then they will toss him to Jurjo once that is done.
If that doesn't happen then he probably got his soul eaten by a Rust or something. Gastwyrms are still busy recruiting after a lot of them died during part 3. This is the less interesting option, but there is a chance he gets his soul corrupted and turned into a Rust. This is not the kind of character that deserves a return though.
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Well I'll say this, he ain't coming back, that's for sure. XD Nothing but eternal torture awaits this guy.