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rainbow im getting touchy with you
I'm proud of this chapter
this is STILL awesome
Thanks
badass dragon is badass
I bet every one knows whats going to happen now.
Brony dog and brony dragon adventures
What colors was it
It looked like this.
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OHMYGOSH!
I just had a awesome Idea. For everyone who just read chapter 9, I'm going to reedit the last part. Reread after I repost
Done, I changed this part.
Here it is,
'My vision was clear for a second, but it was enough time to see a pony in a purple suit and hat and a light black cape on. The pony had a mask pulled down over its face.
I felt something lay on my chest, I raised my hoof to feel paper, my notebook.
I forced out the only word that came to mind, "Hospital!"
My body went limp and my mind began to blacken.
One last thought came to my mind. What the hell is wrong with Rainbow Dash.
With that, everything stopped working and I passed out.'
I think that is better than Rainbow Dash saving him
What the hell is wrong with her? either ways loved the chapter, cant wait to see what happens now that Giro found all the Bronies
50174 if i remember corectly. the dragon was outside of ponyvilles borders and that celestia said that ther was 4 bronies IN ponyville. lance, david, luke and ????. and if that is true than i think it would be easy to spot a dragon his size round town. so ther should be one more left.
right kickass?
50115 OMG i just noticed that your rainboom is my schools colors (does "bulldog clap" mean anything to you?)
This chapter makes me wonder if I would want to be a Pegasus or a dragon. Both of them are awesome I don't know which one to choose. Probably a dragon.
Only one word goes with this chapter AWESOME!!! but why rainbow dash Y U SO MEAN?
Wow, lot of comments. Thanks every one for reading and commenting. Without all of you, this would have ended when he died the second time.
@demonoid47- how did you figure that out Good job
@kingqball- Just two of my favorite colors
@Dat Flank- No one would do it for me so I did it my self Did I do good?
@Every one else- Love the comments, they help me when writing. And don't be afraid to send ideas my way
50987 dam it i was hoping that you went to my school any way do you know were my remote for the orbital moar cannon is
... here it is
ORBITAL MOAR CANNON ACTIVATING! COMMENCING FIRE SEQUENCE
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MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm just wondering. Do you know when the next chapter will be up?
51056
Sorry, I go to a school in a small town. sort of small town
I'm working on Chapter 10 right now, already a few paragraphs into it. But will be a few hours before I finish.
Also, how is this story so popular? I'm just writing what I would really do if I went there and I'm just going by every detail of the show
I have an idea, cliffhanger time. The first few sentences
Warmth. Crackling sound. Softness. No pain.
That's what I could feel and hear as I slowly came to my senses. Where am I? I slowly opened my eyes.
I was on my back, looking up at the night sky. The light from a fire next to me spilling light all around me. What happened?
All I remembered is trying to catch my notebook, doing a sonic boom, catching the notebook, and slamming into the ground. Wait, before I passed out, I remembered somepony walking up to me. Who was that?
Think Lance, think back to that moment. Purple suit and hat, black cape, mask. Wait! I know who it was now. Mare Do Well.
Cliffhanger much
Thanks for puttin me in.
51089
Because we all want to be in Grio's (horse)shoes and live our lives like this.
You have to admit living in equestria dose have it's appeal. (Specialy to us bronies)
im not liking dash in this story. i know she gets jealous when it comes to getting praised, but i never thought shed get jealous when it comes to love
50078 except he was angry also be proud of this it is epic
Uhhh...
I don't know if I really like the story...
It's good, but too fast.
I mean, Twi falling in love so quick, the way it happens is just.. Wierd.
I also don't like how you don't put question marks in end of sentences :\ for example:
What the hell is wrong with Rainbow Dash. With a dot instead of question mark :|
I still kinda like the story and this comment isn't hating, just constructive criticism ;)
LOL Brony Dragon
1617203 oh snap! thats a twist.
WTF is going on here?!?!
Are you like adding so many characters for some epic quest?
was reading and then its like oh ok so just add another character to the story that's fine i mean he is a brony and ill be honest not such a fan of 'those people' (of cause im talking about the SELECT few who just splurge out all the time about it) but that's fine i can deal with it but so many? if there is no mass orgy in the future then i may be disappointed.
I know im being a dick but whatever its the internet i can do what i like.
2745387 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCFyJIDGztA"
Sigh.
Dash, GET A FRICKING LIFE!
Definitely defying that wasn't the smartest idea wasn't the smartest idea.