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Regardless of the sickness (feel better!!!) these have been nice little chapters. on an unrelated note FIRST!!!
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Thanks I love to write chapters that people enjoy
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fell better soon
also, I cant wait to see what happens to lance's mom
o god if my mom came to equestria id be living with the zebras
kickass222yourmom y you not dead my mom will have KILLED me if i gave anything a baby
also moar ditzy doo
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You'll see
Also thanks
if this is how you write when your sick i will FIND you and force the pills down your throut this is sooooo funny
so get better NOW
Epicsauce, It would be a twist if David's big brother came, but he was one of those likeable to every1 except the brother type of brother. I would so do that, I am aweshum at being annoying.
You may be ill, but my criticizm shall show no mercy.
Hmmmm.... You failed to mention the significance of Lance's mom's presence in Equestria. She obviously had to DIE to get here. You could work a chapter or two off the baggage that might be accompanying this. At least fill us in on how she died, and how she left things back on Earth. Also, she seemed strangely comfortable in her new pony body.
Humans are so complex... Makes me glad I'm a figment of everyone's imagination!
Dude, is your real mom like that? If so, I feel bad for you man. Anyways good chapter and I hope you get better. Also on my journey couldn' I just fly there?
69826 you sir have earned this
and giftcard worth 9000 muffins (that i make that is)
she thinks he is sick yet he is a pony and had *** with a PONY thats like getting mad for a human haveing *** with a human
i got an idea make me the one lance's mom talks to maybe...like i a waiter that wears blue think i'm the police...i probably would end up being a dick to her while explaining equestria...lol that would be funny
69848 i agree
69851 you are already a dick jk
(ps ditzy doo is better)
69826 ive noticed a reoccuring problem with your writing, you use 'we was' instead of 'we were' there also a number of other grammerical errors too. you should go back and correct there mistakes
How come I can see some Binding of Isaac esque stuff going on with your Mom in the near future?
69843 umm reread chapter one it was the apoccolips
>>Buckshot umm reread chapter one it was the apoccolips
69859 yous made mistake too! you wrote "and correct there mistakes" instead of "and correct those mistakes" But if my mum did this to me and ruined my pony life i would never forgive her, and run into the everfree forest and get myself eaten by a manticore.
69884 why yes sir you are correct you get one for making a troll back fire
Simply i would have told my mom, God gave me this chance and i took it... you wont go against god now would you?
and also no-one will dare pull me out of my heaven no matter what it maybe (even though it is wanting to become a pony in equestria during the time of the mane 6)
Btw Bro hope you feel better and get better soon or you would be actually living your dream . Lots of rest and OJ, PEACE OUT AND GET WELL SOON
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luckily no My real mom is cooler and more free going.
69843
It was the Rapture, just read chapter one and it should help
Also, to every one else. Thanks for caring about me
69889 good point you gain one
69893 you get 8999 for making epic story
get better soon or will make special sick pony cupcakes
my mom is just like her *groan*
anyways, hope u get better man
I would have asked Celestia to describe just what the hell was going on to her, (your mother), and just sat back and watched.
(I also would have brought along the dog & dragon bronies, just for shit N' giggles)
69903 i know how you feel man
69889
Same with me I stay or there is going to be war I'm serious, if someone tryied to take me away from my dream, there is going to be some serious shit going down
Also, when you said this, 'get better soon or you would be actually living your dream' Did you mean if I die, I'll be living my dream Because if I do, I'm so going to ask God to send me there, if I'm asked or not
69912 you cant die who is going to write this
OF ALL THE BAD THINGS THAT WILL BE THE WORST POSSABLE THING
69912 Oh yea god forbid an early death to you but it was meant like take care of yourself or else if you die you would be living your dream.
And also to hell with people who wants take me out of my heaven after i was given a choice by God?! They have to be insane, and indeed shit will go down
69919
I'm not going to die
69921
So true
69930 btw if we do get a chance to pick our heaven, im gonna see you in Equestria one day
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You'll know who I am then, I'm asking for Lance's body
i got kinda confused at the second part of reply sorry
69936 can you rephrase your last reply xD got kinda confused
69921if someone tried to take that away from me I would shrug of the nice cloak put my 'you ganna die now cloak' and fight with a rage that would put the hulk to shame'
69951 if it was a stranger i would do that plus probably make his heaven hell but if it was family i woulda do what Lance did
69951 there are moar than one type of cloak
then how many are there
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Sorry I mean, I would ask to look like Lance does. The weird eyes, strips, torn ear
Also, who wants to see a character that will be added later on, (Chapter 40 or 50 )
69961 I wanna have a spoiler xD and i wont mind the torn ear part
69961 let me guess...is it twi and lances kid
69961 honestly i wanna be like my avatar, just a bit more well me and a cutie mark of ... well idk wat my talent is but something to do with music or just lots of energy
Okay, here is a character I've been thinking about and have finally decided to add:
A new hero, who fights along side the Mysterious Mare Do Well. The (I need a name for him XD )
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I think you know who he is
Also, I'll release another character, This one knew Lance personally back on earth, can you guess who he is?
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god... if its obvious that twilights pregnant he needs to hurry up and marry her already... Also this new plot twist was absolutely hilarious..
69980 Lol second picture is his dad or brother im guessing, and he has the zebra shape(the snout) but i can be wrong as zebras dont have wings
69980 just a suggestion as well.. they are related
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Just wait for it Its coming up, I'm dragging it on due to Lances out look on life. (i.e. He is oblivous to things like this, mostly because he looks past them easily. )
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Its his brother, who is 21 and out of the military. So he will be an intresting character to write for. I don't know when He'll be added or how he'll be added.
Firing sequence for the orbiral moar cannon has begun...
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69999 wohooo but it seemed kinda obvious with they eyes and zebra snout feels good to be correct , maybe i should be an OC for this story jk jk
Can't wait til they arrive, btw if its not too much you have other fan art of the other OC's such as Zane, Cody, Greg and David?