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I loved it. It was really sweet and well written. I had expected the twist but you really sold the ride and story. Saw no problems in terms of tense or spelling. Really good characterizations and descriptions. Good job
This was good congrats on your first try at the clop field
Very good keeping Fluttershy in character that entire time. Nice Work.
Very good. But for this story, unless you wanted to, you should've kept Mistress being Fluttershy secret. What I saying is that you shouldn't of put Fluttershy on the story tag and ketp the Other. That way, you have more clues and more reasons to read to find out who it was, instead of leaving on the first round, if you know what I mean.
Other wise, I loved it!
Five mustaches out of five.
Great read! Thumbs up!
Whoa. Sexy.
Though describing Mistress kind of gave it away a little prematurely
Excellent. Welcome to clop.
So awesome.
not the first time I've seen the premise but not over done and is well written. good job
Its good. Saw one misspell. Other then that all good.
I'm not sure Fluttershy would have it in her so smack anypony around like that. Still, it was a good story. I too will rate five mustaches and raise you one yay.
>>hn117 Well, the quiet ones almost always have the kinkiest fetishists. Don't forget the line Fluttershy said in the show: "You're going to love me!!!!!!!"
well... kanky
I'm surprised I actually like this fic.