A/N: NO, THIS IS NOT AN APPLETOSH FIC. I do not support that ship. It just the normal relationship between an older brother and little sister.
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On an ordinary day, a tragic event took place. After the combine malfunctions and kills her brother a grief and guilt-ridden Applejack takes to the bars, and her friends do all they can to help her through it. But will the comfort of the five greatest friends she's ever had be enough to free the hard-working mare from her alcoholic state, or is she lost to them forever?
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I felt like doing a sad fic about my favorite character. Don't judge me.
Chapters (5)
AWSOME! It really pulls out applejacks love for her brother.
I really like this. I'm favouriting it now.
Truly brilliant. A heart-wrenching, yet grand, read.
Edit: My cousin was beind wierd, sorry for random emotes.
What are you, some sort of faggot?
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You saying you do?
2298816 Look who're talking too... he loves/supports EVERYTHING
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Oh. Forgot about that ( Smashes face into door ) memory jogged.
I like this story a lot, it's really good.
The only advice I can give you, is that you need more commas and you have a couple mistakes you need to fix.
What I do is I read the chapter aloud to myself, and whenever something doesn't make sense, I can fix it.
You should try that here, I read this out loud, and I caught a couple words missing.
Great job though, I love the story so far.
Despite the feels.
The Stallion getter over er... Has rum in it
Brilliant.
Pfffft! Wow Pinkie, nice party names XD
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Ha