Too many friends lost, too many mistakes written in pen. Princess Celestia is condemned to living all of eternity in this lonely substitute of Hell, that is unless she can work up the courage to free herself.
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That was short, sweet and to the point. Not really sad. More like a gushing river of sadness. Whatever. Upvote.
Woop de do.
You think you're being original with this? You think this is actually INTERESTING? Please, stop. This was boring after the third one of these almost two years ago, and it's just infuriatingly pointless now.
Not that bad but seems a little out of character for Celestia. Although, I could see the death of her closest student being the straw that broke her. Anyhow, this is well written and the thought of this made me pretty sad so good job!
You gotta make a part 2. Please. Like what happens to Luna and how everything happens when Celestia dies.
1806140 Okay, it's comments like this that piss me off. Yeah, I get that Celestia-depressed fics have been done before. So have recreations of Cupcakes, My Little Dashie, Twiluna, Fluttermac, Raridash, Flutterdash, Rairjack, ect. EVERYTHING has been done at least once.
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I'm not talking about 'Celestia depressed' fics. That's quite fine.
What isn't fine is a shallow 'oh woe is me, friends are dying, the only out is cutting myself fic' subgenre of 'screw ponies days over in 1000 words'. There is no meat to this story, no POINT, nothing particularly witty or interesting, or even remotely original take on the concept.
1806177 Fair enough, apologies for my the misunderstanding on my part. I was originally going to do it differently with Luna finding her, but decided to do it like this, but then have Celestia change her mind when it was too late.
Good story but in my head canon a simple knife is not able to kill an alicorn
1809019 It's not a knife, it's cleaver, and I thought I made it clear that she cut deeply into her throat. Hm, Guess I'll need to edit it a bit.
1809774 sorry let me rephrase it: in my head canon a weapon is not able to penetrate the skin or cause any serious damage to an alicorn unless it has magical properties
1809774 I am sorry I wasn't very clear in what I was saying
1809834Ah, well physics don't apply in my stories.