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Tranquility


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Ponyville, a place of tourism, laughs, cutie marks, and unknown love. As in unknown, it means you never know who likes who until they've either confessed it, or moved on to somepony else, which can get under the skin of certain nosy ponies who want the latest gossip in town.

Fluttershy is no exception, simply that she's never really dated somepony or even given love a thought. In fact, whenever a stallion or occasional mare comes along and asks her the big question, she shies away or changes the subject. That is, until a certain red stallion catches her attention. Will she go in for the kill, metaphorically speaking, or will she evade love at all costs?

(A good ol' FlutterMac story) (The Mane Six will come in later, by the way.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

We need more Fluttermac's like this again I think I've faved every single good Fluttermac out there so keep writing! I will be WATCHING:pinkiecrazy:. Jk but keep writing!

This chapter has brought to you by MEN:

WE DON'T KNOW WHAT WE DID!:eeyup:

Yay! since Rarity is now here this story is a "Diamond" in the rough. *Cough* *Cough* I mean good chapter!:twilightsheepish:

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Yep, and soon, the rest of the mane six will arrive shortly.

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Naturally you WOULD fave them, given your username.

Story Title: Deep Seated Romance
Author: Tranquility
Reviewed by: Sirius_Face
It’s easy for new writers to sometimes overreach and try too hard when using their words. Fancy prose and ten dollar words only do so much – like garnish on the dinner plate. Deep Seated Romance is one of those stories with too much garnish on the plate, getting in the way of the meat of the story. While the theme of this story is something tried and true, the presentation practically trips over itself to tell the story.
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Score: 3/10

Oh, Angel... and the baby chicken thing. :rainbowlaugh:
Did I ever tell you that I love this couple? :heart:

The poor thing... :fluttercry:
Angel is so funny! :rainbowlaugh:
Aw... How sweet! Big Mac gets Fluttershy another egg! :heart:
I wonder what advice Rarity will have in store... :raritywink:

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