Everypony knows that Big Macintosh is madly in love with Fluttershy, but he wants to tell her in a very special way. (I wanted to make a Christmas special for the followers I have. Hopefully you like it! Here is the audio book reading in case you wanna check it out. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5Xaqb3IiQc)
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Aside from a few spelling errors, that was really good! I especially like how you made Apple Bloom climb up with the mistle toe. This was short, but enjoyable. Good job!
It was an enjoyable read, but it could have been better if you had done a quick run through. There were a few spelling errors, but I really love this pairing. I also enjoyed your portrayal of Big McIntosh. All in all, despite it being pretty short, it was a nice read. Hope you continue your writing.
~Umbrae
It was short and sweet! Small spelling mistakes but its great any way!
Great story! Keeps it simple, yet effective. Big Mac would be proud
D'aawwww.
You should add more it was good though to