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Pony Vegeta


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This story is a sequel to Pony Ball Z


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It has been one year since Vegeta's excursion into Equestria, and the violent battles that rocked the very foundations of the equine Earth have ended. During these battles, Twilight Sparkle was ripped from their world, and still remains missing. Taking responsibility for causing this disaster, the former queen of darkness, Lunalia, prepares to embark on a journey across time and space to return the wayward Twilight to Equestria. Join us as we meet old friends, and fight new battles! Join us as questions of the past are answered! Join us as we step into the grand tour- PONY BALL GT!

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Hmm, another Dragon ball story? :trixieshiftright: will read later

is this going to be like dragon ball z GT

10 bucks says they're on Human Earth.
Great to see you typing the sequel man! I look forward to reading more! :moustache:

Okay, so just as Lunalia was casting the spell, a meteor hit the castle, breaking her concentration and causing the spell to misfire in the worst way possible.:pinkiegasp::twilightoops:

Now Rainbow Dash is watching the beginning of the Saiyan saga.:rainbowderp:

Pinkie Pie has a front row seat to the battle between Vegeta, Future Trunks, and Cell.:pinkiecrazy:

Applejack is probably in the time that Future Trunks came from.:applejackconfused:

Lunalia is most likely in your post-GT era, which means she'll be the one to get Vegeta's help. Should be interesting...

Rarity and Fluttershy...I got nothing.:fluttercry::raritycry: (I just don't know what went wrong!:derpytongue2:)

Also, Lunalia's spell takes her three days to recharge her magic after she uses it once...something tells me Senzu Beans are gonna be used rather extensively in order to make the spell practical to use.:ajsmug:

I also predict Pinkie's schizophrenia eventually forcing the gang to pause on their journey until Pinkamena can be dealt with.:pinkiecrazy:

I just hope Goku gets to join the adventure this time around.:fluttershysad:

Interesting. very interesting. I'm eager to see where this goes.:rainbowdetermined2::scootangel:

I'm agreeing with Friend of Bronies locations. Glad the sequel is finally here.:twilightsmile:

1634370 Got any guesses on where Rarity and Fluttershy might be?:fluttershysad:

Also, when Vegeta and Lunalia meet for the first time in one year, awkward won't even begin to describe what it'll be like for them!:pinkiecrazy:

What are your thoughts on my theories about the Senzu Beans, Pinkie's schizophrenia, and Goku?:rainbowhuh:

Scattered through time on the Z-Fighter's Earth as a result of the Inter-Spatial Distortion Jump spell misfiring, where and when have Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Princess Lunalia been sent?

Will they simply gain allies from the post-GT era, or will they also gain other allies?

Will Princess Lunalia be able to locate the five Elements of Harmony and reunite with them?

Will they ever find Twilight?
And what role will Pinkie Pie's evil alter ego, Pinkamena, play in all of this?

Find out on the next exciting episode of Pony Ball GT!

PS: I...regret...NOTHING!!!:rainbowwild:

1635348 I'm going to guess that they're somewhere in the original Dragon Ball. That would make sense, since neither one of them is a good fighter and back then the highest power level was what, just over 100? And if not, maybe in one of the movies.

If Lunalia is going to have to travel to each dimension to find them, then yeah, Senzu Beans are probably going to be used big time.

With Pinkie, well first of all, she doesn't have schizophrenia. Typically with schizophrenia, the person is super paranoid, has hallucinations, and has very poor emotional responses to just about everything. Pinkie has more of a double personality thing going on. And while Pinkamena could be a problem, I have a feeling Pinkie is going to use her to fight people instead. Like if the person is too strong for Pinkie, she'll let Pinkamena take over.:pinkiecrazy:

And I do hope Goku shows up.:twilightsmile:

1635663 You might have a point about where Fluttershy and Rarity are.

You're right on the money about Pinkie's condition, but somehow, I doubt Pinkie will be able to use Pinkamena for combat without a great deal of psychological counselling beforehand.

1635759 That's why Pinkamena is going to be a last resort kind of thing. Or if Pinkie near death then Pinkamena will forcefully take over. Like how Ichigo from Bleach first got his hollow powers.

1632864 Going to be honest. I saw your really long comments immediately after I woke up. I am not a happy person at that time of day. So, I was less than pleased to see how you chose to point out my mistakes. I've had plenty of time to cool off, and kicking someone in the face helped me to alleviate my rage :twilightsheepish: Anyway, I'm not a writer by trade. I'm having to try and remember proper writing and such after being out of school for more than 8 years. I'm going to go in an fix these as I find time, but please don't do it like this again. :facehoof:


1633748 I will tell you this much: You are right about some, and wrong about others.

1634370 I'm glad it's here too! I've spent enough time and money doing research for this thing!

1636176
Oh...:twilightoops:
I'm sorry...:ajsleepy:
I rarely get those kind of reactions after my comments. In fact, this is probably the first one like that... with a specific request not to do it again... okay, I won't. I'm still willing to help. You just have to tell me how.
Though, you know, deleting comments using bad mood as an excuse is... well... not cool, really. Oh, well, it's not like I never had a bad morning... or bad day for that matter. But you could simply ask me to do so. Forcefully kicking out those who want to help doesn't necessarily get you help, you know...
But I can forget that and give you another chance.
I shall now not say a word about mistakes and such unless asked.
Goodbye.

My day has once again been made by reading a DBZ fic

Well... they're boned.:twilightoops:

1633748 I dunno, to me, it sound more like Broly second coming. But I could be wrong.

1646511 For which pony and why? Details, man, details!

1635799 You seem to be forgetting that Ichigo needed to learn how to control his inner Hollow before he could be sure its power wouldn't be a threat to his friends as well as his enemies.:facehoof: And let's face facts, Pinkie is so badly traumatized from what she did to Star Binder that she'll absolutely refuse to let Pinkamena out unless there's some way to guarantee that Pinkie's friends don't also get hurt by Pinkamena's madness.:facehoof::facehoof:

1648306 Oops, forgot that part. I was talking about Rainbow Dash.:twilightblush:

I AM READING THIS NOW! MOAR AND QUICK!

look on my user page in my top favorites. you will find a little surprise...:ajsmug:

1633748 I think I know where Fluttershy and Rarity are [I think they are in the original Series when Kid Goku was still collecting the Dragonballs with Bulma [And they are at the mountain area Goku lived\

Who doesn't love it when teleportation spells go wrong?
So Lunalia apparently landed in her own past. This is going to be interesting. I must compliment your writing skills once more, too.
Also, MOAR! :3

So they are in the past, is this going by DBZ you cant change the past rules, or doctor who paradoxes everywhere rules?

new layout... DAH FAUQ :flutterrage: but still good chapter

So Fluttershy and Rarity are in Kakarrot's past years before Vegeta even came. Well it's a goood thing they didn't appear where Vegeta first came to Earth because they would have to fight him and probably die or lose. Well I wonder how AJ is:ajbemused:

I bet its like their all in different timelines in Dragonball Like the kid Goku era, then Vegeta and Napa come to earth, then cell saga .
I'm just taking guesses

Yes, I was right. They're in the original Dragon Ball.

1775720 The ones involved in the spell going wrong? And thank you! I should be able to get started writing the next chapter by this weekend. :rainbowdetermined2:

1776492 Yeah, this new layout will take some getting used to. And hopefully I can continue to pump out good chapters. :yay:

1777119 AJ will be getting some attention soon.

1784945 Indeed you were, sir. :raritywink:

:face-palm: Yep, that's Kid-Goku alright. Looks like Rarity and Fluts are in for a long, long, LONG day. At least until Bulma shows up.

And the Dark Queen is in her own past, but AFTER she and the King had their epic clash... this will not end well.

BTW: Just curious, but what IS the Kings name, I think you said it in the last story, but I can't quite remember.

1795326 Yeah. He's mentioned in Chapter 8 when Celestia is telling everyone about Lunalia, and again in Chapter 10 before the big mother/daughter fight. His name was Dawn Breaker. And this chapter was really hard to write. A conversation between kid Goku and Rarity wasn't easy to pull off. :twilightsheepish:

1814731 Thanks! I'm about halfway done with chapter 4. Hopefully will have it out by the weekend.

xD rainbow dash u just screwed the future because kakarrot needed to die oh well i wonder if she can beat frieza, but her reaction when she sees vegeta will be hilirious

1856055 Actually, as long as no one screws up and mentions the dragon balls to Vegeta & Nappa, the fight against Frieza won't happen. They were coming to Earth regardless due to it being the next planet on the list, but in the canon story they abandoned the planet they were on so they could head straight to earth to get the dragon balls. Since Goku didn't die here, the dragon balls never get mentioned, so Nappa & Vegeta stay on schedule. If they don't find out about the balls, then neither does Frieza, so he never goes to Namek.

I'm just stating all this to clarify the canon information. You'll ave to stay tuned to see what I actually have planned. :pinkiecrazy:

Goodness, that's some major universal messing here!
I LOVE IT!:raritystarry:
Oh, so maaaany questions. What about Gohan, will he be trained? How strong will Goku be without King Kai's help? He will obviously not use Kaioken or Spirit Bomb. How hilarious will RD's meeting with Vegeta be? Wait, didn't he told them his story a while back? Gotta reread that, I suppose... Wait, actually, how strong will Rainbow Dash be at her meeting with those two? This is soooo exciting!
And wait... what is this object that landed in Equestria? I mean is it a probe or what? I can't recall anything from this description... Curse me and my not so good knowledge of DB-verse...
And really, we have, what, 6 different perspectives? RD, Rarity and Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Lunalia, Equestria... That's a lot to keep track on. You have talent here, mister.
Keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

doctor whooves would be very angry with rainbow right now

1856238 wouldn't that also mean Goku never becomes a Super Saiyan? and Vegeta probably won't as well due to seeing GOKU become one before him? heck, if Vegeta dies during the coming fight, wouldn't the Quantum Causality wipe Vegeta out of existence? and as for the 'meteor' OH boy, I cannot wait! I'm eager to see what happens next! :scootangel::rainbowdetermined2:

1856238 this makes so many parodoxes :rainbowderp: and not to be annoying but now that that happens wouldnt the androids come and be able to destroy everything

you see, this is what happens when you let novices dimension travel and they happen to go back through time.:facehoof:

1856370 Indeed. 6 different perspectives. This is going to be the most difficult portion of the story to write, but will be worth the effort. As far as what is going to happen... stay tuned!

1856798 Next chapter is going to kick off AJ's story. I'll get started on it as soon as I can. Hopefully I can get started on it this weekend.

1857165 You would be correct. Without Frieza, Goku wouldn't go super saiyan. And it would be impossible to wipe Vegeta out of existence due to how time travel works in the DB universe.

1857201 If things continue as normal, yes, the androids would pretty much wipe everything out.

1858793 well, maybe not COMPLETELY wipe out Vegeta, but if the current timeline continues and no one mentions the Dragon Balls to Vegeta and Nappa, thus writing Frieza out of it, thus causing Goku to not become a Super Saiyan (Granted it would still be possible...) it would take Vegeta's power down a few pegs wouldn't it? because he wouldn't have the drive to become a Super Saiyan because Goku didn't. Goku became one, then Vegeta, out of frustration, began training non-stop, and eventually he became one after his rage broke from him realizing his limit.

1865334 Correct. It has created 5 different timelines.

I predict ALOT of head-aches with this,and I've watched the Trunks/Android/Cell sagas, so that's saying something.

But dang if I'm not loving this story so far, hope to see more!

2 things though: why use Massa- massapa- Oh whatever, why use that name? (And how the heck do you SAY the word anyway?!)

And second, will Future Trunks actually be part of the story? (I'm sure hoping so!):pinkiehappy:

1867077 Why do I use it you ask? :trixieshiftright: Primarily because that's the actual attack name. Blame Ocean for being too lazy to try and pronounce the original name, thus making 'Special Beam Cannon' so popular. The other reason is that I prefer the Japanese dub over the English. On that note, any time I use dialogue directly from the show, it will be pulled from the Japanese dub.

Fair enough, to each his own and all that.