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ColdGoldLazarus


Tired, But Trying (Taking Hope In G5)

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When you lose a game, sometimes the only thing you can do is start over...

Twilight stumbles across one of Equestria's most closely-guarded secrets, something that Celestia refuses to tell even her. But how far will she go to find the answers, and will they be worth it in the end?
Meanwhile, Applejack has been having strange nightmares, ones she hasn't experienced since she was a filly. But what do these cryptic sequences mean?
Lastly, Rarity is forced into another conflict with her own element when a disgraced cousin appears, begging for the dressmaker's protection from the law.
But how are these three events connected, and what could it mean for the future -and the past- of Equestria?

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Comments ( 5 )

A very interesting start, how it will shape, should be fun. And I hope it was a blast to wright.

A cool start to a new big story. Its been a while since you posted a story, but now I cant wait to see more of this. Good luck and have fun writing it :pinkiehappy:
Oh and one other thing. Is "his"

Another snap of his fingers, and he was gone, leaving no sign of his ever having existed.

supposed to be "this"?
just something I nocticed.

3584281 Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far, and hope you will continue to! :twilightsmile: And yep, it's been fun so far.

3586148 Thanks! Yeah, it has been a while; RL stuff has been keeping me busy lately. And again, thanks!

That was actually just some awkward phrasing on my part; Discord was the only one that disappeared. I might go back and fix that sometime.

I can't even describe properly how excited I was, while reading that prologue! It was short but really good start. Very promising, especially if it involves Discord. ! I look forward to the next chapter and I hope you update soon :raritywink:

3588115 Glad you liked it!

Unfortunately, Discord isn't going to play too big a role, though he may show up on occasion here and there. :pinkiesmile:

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