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Darkswirl


Sometimes I like to pretend that I'm good at writing.

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The Great and Powerful Trixie has been through every trench life has dug, although not to say she didn't deserve them all.

But is Trixie really everything she seems to be?

She can't really be that arrogant and boastful pony, right?

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Comments ( 31 )

You made me DAWWWWW!

What wonderful one shot! I still don't regret that watch.

This deserves to be featured! :pinkiehappy:

Two people have read the story.

How the hell do I have six votes already?

Very sad dude. And screw the princesses they be a holes for hurting a pony's feelings. They don't make very good rulers loving and caring for their subjects MAKES ME MAD. But surprise ending made it all better.
Good job.

1410908 They're not real xD It was all Trixie's imagination as she beat herself up.

1410914 Really you had me going and be mad at them when it was all in her head.
Oh well I still don't really like them anyway good job.

1410942 I kinda thought it would be obvious when Trixie opened her eyes and the theater was in such a state of disrepair.

1410952 I figured it was time flying by quickly and she just remained there.

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Trixie! You need to believe in yourself! :heart:

This is the first fimfic that I've read in which Trixie is portrayed not as a boastful pony, but merely as a creature trying to make something of herself. And when Celstia said those awful things... :applecry:

Well done! :pinkiehappy:

Predictable, but still awesome.

Wow for a second there I was goin to call celestia super bitch:flutterrage::trollestia:

1410901 They're mutants. XD Each of them has three arms. :pinkiecrazy:

1412263 XD OK, look down at your arm. At the end is your hand. It has a THUMB. Normal people have two thumbs total. You said 2 people had viewed the story at that time, but you had six thumbs. :P Both visitors are freaks-of-nature and have three arms. Thus three thumbs. They all lopped their thumbs off to show the appreciation for your fic. Hence your six thumbs. :pinkiecrazy:

1412271 I said votes, but I see now. x3

1412304 Oh hell. So you did. My bad. I just don't know what went wrong. In that case, disregard mutant comment. :P VOTER REGISTRATION FRAUD :heart:

I still say that Celestia is cruel indeed..

If I ignore that..

She had been made a foal of by the Princess herself

is a ponification that makes it slightly confusing and that..

"Would you like to be my friend?"

is the worst combination of words that somepony ever could use (however, it's believable due to this show..), this was another neat one-shot.
Just one thing.. if Twilight was up to fix this afthermath, how comes that she just finds Trixie in the theathres of Canterlot, where Trixie just sneaked in and barely was noticed by anypony since this is an illegal move most likely, and not before/after?
If she would have gained help, then I could understand it. But Trixie is all alone.

If you tune at this spot, combining short actions with delicious and believable plots, the next one surely could raise to an great one-shot. (Not that neat is bad, but as a good author improving is always the big target, isn't it?)
:pinkiehappy:

1412335 Either my head is still groggy from just waking up or whatever you just typed truly made no sense :D (No offense). However, I think you asked or implied that this could lead to another one shot, but that is not the case. It's a little exercise to get me started for a series with Trixie and Twilight (even though I STILL haven't finished my 'Elements of Harmony' series).

1412360
Maybe both. I thought that the theatre is still in use, but after reading those lines again, it seems that it's not.
..Wait. Are you saying that Trixie is living in an old theatre of Canterlot since she failed in Ponyville? In that case I misunderstood something somewhere really hard. :derpyderp2:

1412439 Yes she is. All that play and humiliation, she just imagined it all.

1412442
Yeah, I got that. It's just that, well. Spotlights are rather expensive, so my brain was like "if a theatre is closed, someone would take them for re-sell. They never just would be randomly destroyed. That's silly!". I thought that Twilight followed her to that point what would have been rather unbelievable so.. I wrote it before breakfast. :facehoof:

1410973>>1412442 *POUNDS THE WALL REPEATEDLY*

*POUND* SO*POUND* MUCH*POUND* FFFFFFFFFFFFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLSSSSSS:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::raritydespair:

Poor Trixie. *Sigh* Honestly... I heap most of the blame on three flankholes who couldn't simply walk away...

1416522 Three Flankholes? I understand the terminology but have no idea who you're talking about (it's late at night, cut me some slack x3)

1416533 Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity for simply not turning and walking away during Trixie's show in Ponyille. And it's late where I am too, so it's cool. :raritywink:

And then Celestia spoke.

Real or not, FUCK. YOU. :flutterrage:

a very good story. I liked it. the feels were nice.

This is why I prefer Luna over Celestia.

I mean Celestia was all like :trollestia: Ha, what a lie. I'm in the mood to make a somepony cry. *makes poor Trixie cry*

It was a nice story though, I like the ending too. I always love stories where Twi and Trixie become friends or marefriends. :twilightsmile::trixieshiftleft:

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