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Darkswirl


Sometimes I like to pretend that I'm good at writing.

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We are Forerunners; guardians of all that exists. The roots of the galaxy have grown deep under our careful tending. Where there is life, the wisdom of our countless generations has saturated the soil. Our strength is a luminous sun, towards which all intelligence blossoms... And the impervious shelter beneath which it has prospered. I stand before you, offering a chance at new life, with your new form, to become the sole bearer of our Mantle in a world where we have shied away to keep pure from any possible corruption.

Do you accept?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 48 )

1658701 Yes, she is in a physical form. I'm still toying with the idea of whether or not to give her some of her old "powers".

1658701 Chapter's finished. Let me know what you think of the plot twist. :trollestia:

1740027 It explains how she's able to do all that wacky stuff, though. ;D

AND ERH MERH GERHD HE LIVES

1742313 *Reloads my shotgun*

Executive order 66 completed.

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GOD FUCKING DAMNIT RAINBOW DASH

NOW HOW THE BLUEBERRY FUCKSICLES AM I SUPPOSED TO FINISH MY STORY?

Did Pinkie just say Reclaimer?:applejackunsure:

Whoa bro...

Just whoa.

Instafave.

Dear author, I have to say that you have definitely piqued my interest so far!

Can't tell if Pinkie is just being Pinkie, or is a Forerunner sleeper cell... :rainbowderp:

Guilty Spark? Just what have you been up to? Great chapter, hope to see more of this story soon, keep goin and stay golden^^

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When you say reclaimer, I immediately think Guilty Spark. Throw in the fact he was always a bit quirky and that I doubt he'd wager the future of Halo on a simple fist fight, it makes me think he might have had a back up plan. He had a crap ton of melenia to research Halo and the forerunner's legacy. He could have done what the librarian did with Cortana and Chief on a smaller scale, by creating a generic line of ponies to act in his stead should a reclaimer appear in this world... of course this is speculation....

2145019 Nah. Guilty Spark was destroyed, this I'm sticking to.

2146668
Alright then... although what I did say does sound like the idea for a new story...

Spoiler Alert:
343 Guilty Spark is in the second book of THE FORERUNNER SAGA "Primordium". Let just say he's not done yet

2151861 As cool as that may be, Guilty Spark is dead in my story.

2151861 Haha, while that is true, he is so damaged he can only tell them his story. Afterwards, his remains are sent out to space.

2155067 I read the book, only his robotic shell was sent into space.

2155115 Yea the Actual AI 343 Guility Spark high jacked and entire UNSC starship and crew in an attempt to do a rescue mission of the Librarian.

Really good story so far!

:facehoof: Why do I have the feeling that Pinkie Pie is this shield world's Monitor!

2332870aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww:applecry:

2332870 Do you think you can take a break from KIA and do this story? This story seems more interesting seeing as Cortana didn't die and she is now in Equestria and is trying to stop the flood from taking over the planet.

2632611 If you get what I am saying, it is that there is more action in this story rather than Noble Six just sitting in a cell with a language barrier between the two races

How the heck did i reply to my own comment when I never clicked it? and I clicked the owner's name for the first comment not Foxi. So what the heck is going on?

2632619 I see what you're saying, and I'll see what I can do.

I'm surprised that so few people commented, meaning me being the only one. Oh well. Great so far really think you should continue this.
Also... seoenquirer.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/firstpost.jpg

Well, other than some extremely minor errors, this story is phenomenal! :pinkiehappy:

I'm seriously digging the mental process that created it, going to have to check out some of your other work... For science... :pinkiecrazy:


Btw, faved.

Good story, any plans on continuing?

5402991 Nope, sorry. The story has been marked as cancelled, and it's up for adoption. More details on my profile page.

well...that happened.😐

crap! she's been made! RUN! FOREST! RUN!

princess sunny to the rescue hell ye

uh..oh this will not end well!

wait! wait! hold it! hold it! HOW THE HAY DOES PINKIE KNOW ABOUT THE RECLAIMERS!
OH right pinkie logic forgot about that for a second HEHE opps.

9194617
In the story, Pinkie was actually the Monitor of whatever I even made this to be. So, she was Forerunner in disguise. This story won't be completed, btw.

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