Twilight has learned a lot of things over the course of her life. From her books, her mentor, her friends and even from ponies she'd rather not spend a great deal of time around. One of those things she learned was that friendship isn't something that's as readily defined as other things in the world. After solving the crisis of Trixie being possessed by the Alicorn Amulet she sets out to meet with the fellow unicorn once again.
However she has no intention of engaging her in another duel. She's going after her to help.
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*inhales* YES!!!! I like this
I dunno, this seems a bit contrived. I mean, why would Twilight feel responsible for what Trixie did? None of that was really her fault. Sure, she humiliated Trixie, but that was because of Snips and Snails not using their brains and bringing the Ursa Minor to Ponyville for Trixie to slay. What's more, Trixie's decision to pursue revenge was just that: Her decision. There were other ways to deal with the problem, but her pride made it impossible for her to even consider other avenues.
It's a touching story that's well-written (albeit a bit melodramatic. Seriously, it's as if the weather ponies scheduled that downpour specifically for this scene.
), but the premise needs reworking. I don't object to Twilight wanting to be Trixie's friend. I just don't think she'd feel guilty about something that wasn't her fault. 
Metool Bard
Not everything is quite as it seems. There are a number of chapters in the works with more details to be had.
Thanks for the review though.
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All according to keikaku.
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. A bit rough around the edges, and maybe a little forced (we'll see how it unfolds from here), but very promising.
Promising start, Charlie
My only advice would be to make sure and read it out loud before posting. See where your sentences flow, and where they stop. Look for those sneaky missing commas, and places where words end up on the wrong sides of each other. I always read my chapters out loud to my wife before posting them, as she tends to notice things I miss a lot. I definitely suggest finding somepony to read to who likes your words, but isn't afraid to point out possible improvements.
I'll be watching for more. Keep it up!
angry mob scene imminent.
"What could possibly go wrong?"
In the dark, deep reaches of the cosmos, Murphy, father of Discord, chuckles evilly as he hears someone utter the forbidden Words, and he knows that it is once again time to troll some poor, unsuspecting bastard.
Poor Twilight. You never, ever say something like that.
Upvoted the story.
Those five words. If any of you know the "Challenge Accepted" meme, we'll one of them goes like this. A man is walking in rain storm and he says "This day can't possibly get any worse." And then it switches to the Challenge Accepted guy dressed up as God with the caption "Challenged Accepted". The moral of the story is never say "What could possibly go wrong" or "Things can't get any worse" or any thing of the like. Because it always can get worse. So Twilight, you just sort of screwed yourself.
Something tells me we'll be finding out...
With those 5 words things will get worse. Lets see... Dash will come in and "save" twi twi from trixie and she will run again and twi gets mad and goes after her with her friends asking what wrong with her?