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Time Agent pony

Time agent is the name, time travel and writing Fimfictions is the game


This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls: An Amazonian Adventure

After receiving a mysterious invitation, Twilight, her friends and all the heroes of Earth are whisked away to participate in tournament of multiversal proportions. With the fate of their earth hanging in the balance, Twilight and her friends must unite with other warriors from across the multiverse and hopefully survive the fight of their lives.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Excellent job on the start of this latest story in your series. Again, the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up are well done. Yeah, I could see where most of them would be suspicious of the invitation, but Rainbow could have really good points.

Anyway, on to the next chapter.

Again, you did a really good job on the dialogues, characterizations and future chapter set-up. So, the Grandmaster and the Collector set up this competition with Ambush Bug and Arcade doing color commentary. REALLY liked the chat between Twilight and Tommy concerning the reasons for going along with this until they can come up with a better plan as well as the good selection of heroes both familiar and more obscure. Hopefully, they're all going to find a way to save ALL of their worlds. But in the meantime -

Anyway, on to the next chapter.

Again, this was a well-done chapter with great dialogue, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. Yeah, Twilight and Tommy finding out more about the contest following the latter's victory over Ryu was certainly a welcome touch as well as finding out what happened to the losers. Of course, Spiral took them down before they could do too much more. And that set-up concerning the Grandmaster and the Collector's champion at the end of the tournament - yikes.

REALLY looking forward to more of this.

Thank you for the comments and your continued support of this series:twilightsmile::raritywink:

You are quite welcome, as usual.

Another great job on the dialogue, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. Definitely appreciated Twilight and Tommy's reflections on how things were going in the tournament as well as Goku and Vegeta's tag team fight (and ironic callback to the number of times Superman and Goku have fought in various fan series). The chats between the tournament's organizers were also good material. And Twilight's fight with Blaze and reflection on her friends' fights were also rather good.

VERY MUCH looking forward to more of this.

Once again, thank you for the comment and the support:twilightsmile::raritywink: and sorry for the delayed release of this chapter:twilightblush:

Quite all right. I know real world concerns come first.

And you are quite welcome.

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