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Fluttershy and her family didn’t have the nerve to tell Zephyr that Santa wasn’t real. So every year Fluttershy brings him to the mall to see “Santa”. But the mall is a scary place made worse by the latest toy craze about to hit the stores. How will she survive with Zephyr’s belief intact?

Written for Hamster Wizard for Jinglemas

Idea by Shakespearicles

Edited by Shakespearicles

Preread by Nailah

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11788575
Gooo team sick!

Thanks for the fic! Love the decision to do a first-person Fluttershy fic because the entire thing reads like a horror story.

Actually, this is just a horror story, because the embarrassment Flutters is going through out here is life-altering.

As a big brother ... I could feel this.

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11788575
You know... there are other people who have a less then positive experience with old saint Nick. Like that one guy he slapped for when he said Jesus wasn't that great. Or Australians

Fluttershy and her family didn’t have the nerve to tell Zephyr that Santa wasn’t real. So every year Fluttershy brings him to the mall to see “Santa”. But the mall is a scary place made worse by the latest toy craze about to hit the stores. How will she survive with Zephyr’s belief intact?

Somehow, I always supposed that Zephyr was Fluttershy's BIG brother

which just makes this premise even more interesting imho
:twilightsmile:

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