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Brinstar77


A casual fanfic writer who stumbled down a bit of a MLP: FiM obsession hole, hence the existence of this account.

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Edit: Before I read this.

So, these Scions of the Konic is your Homebrew Space Marine's Chapter's own name?

And how do you own a Gloriana-class Flagship!?

I thought those are only reserved for the Primarchs on the original 18 Legions/Chapters?

how the second most looked-down-upon chapter of Space Marines in the entire Imperium of Man(the first being the Lamenters, of course)

Damn! Wonder how and why? Then again, the Imperium of Man is still sadly a pile of corrupt crap that still shames the Emperor himself to this day.


So, which one of the Heretic/Chaos Space Marine Legions will be the main antagonists this time!!??

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GW isn't very consistent about the Gloriana. One Ultramarines successor Chapter, the Nemisis Chapter, has one. But it was liberated from the Word Bearers a few years after the end of the Horus Heresy.

So who actually knows how many actually were built.

I just hope that Celestia and Luna are okay, I like to see their reactions in these kinds of situations, especially when it comes to the horrors of the 41st millennium.

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So, these Scions of the Konic is your Homebrew Space Marine's Chapter's own name?

Yes, it is.

And how do you own a Gloriana-class Flagship!?

I thought those are only reserved for the Primarchs on the original 18 Legions/Chapters?

They get to have it (read:have been saddled with it) because the Unquestionable Perfection is a barely-functional wreck of a Gloriana-Class that none of the 18 original chapters even want. The Unquestionable Perfection is basically a jab at how the more cliched homemade chapters have a Gloriana-class flagship that they shouldn’t.

Damn! Wonder how and why?

Let’s just say that the Chapter’s leadership made a STAGGERINGLY stupid decision, and paid for it when that decision directly resulted in them dying hilariously undignified deaths.

So, which one of the Heretic/Chaos Space Marine Legions will be the main antagonists this time!!??

Haven’t quite decided yet. Probably one of the ones that aren’t completely devoted to any specific god, but that doesn’t narrow it down much. I do know that this particular Company of the Legion will be allied with a group of Craftworld Eldar, though, for reasons that will become evident as the story progresses.

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I have plans for Celestia, and thus I can say that she and Luna are alive, though they almost certainly aren’t well.

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What kind of elder would side wit-…
Never mind I see which one it would be

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Guessing word bearers or a successor warband of them

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Dark Eldar! :twilightangry2:


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Whatever happened to Twilight's five friends, Spike and their families and Ponyville?

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The kind of Craftworld (i.e. non-dark) Eldar who are willing to accept help from those aligned with the gods of chaos if it means saving the immortal souls of their kin from a fate worse than death. As for how and why a traitor legion would help with that? That will be revealed as the story progresses.

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Wow, a Craftworld willing to sacrifice a random innocent "xeno" world like Equis/Equestria!!!!???? :facehoof: :twilightangry2:

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They’ve indirectly (and intentionally) slaughtered millions more xenos without provocation to save a few dozen of their kin before. And a whole LOT more than just a few dozen Eldar souls are at stake here. So yeah, of course they would.

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Yep, fuck the eldar well the ignorance ones guilliman has a former dark eldar girlfriend

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Hope they get Bad Karma, just as the chaos forces as well!

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Whatever happened to Twilight's five friends, Spike and their families and Ponyville?

Two of Twilight's friends got captured, two of them are laying low in Chaos-controlled Canterlot, and two of them are with a bunch of refugees from Ponyville, Canterlot, Cloudsdale, and several other locations. More details will be revealed as the story progresses.

Im going to enjoy seeing what subset of Pinkie you use, especially when written down, as Im pretty sure the Astartes would go nuts if she pilled a Use The Farce, Luke when a Chaos ambush occurs.

Or as Pinkie might put it.

Kylo Ren is a Slooooowpoke. :pinkiecrazy:

Especially when they realise, She Is Not A Psyker. And absolutely terrifyingly, when she wants to, she doesnt roll dice.:rainbowderp:

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Im going to enjoy seeing what subset of Pinkie you use, especially when written down, as Im pretty sure the Astartes would go nuts if she pilled a Use The Farce, Luke when a Chaos ambush occurs.

Or as Pinkie might put it.

Kylo Ren is a Slooooowpoke. :pinkiecrazy:

Especially when they realise, She Is Not A Psyker. And absolutely terrifyingly, when she wants to, she doesnt roll dice.:rainbowderp:

Actually, she does roll dice, at least in the literal sense. And any psykers in her general vicinity had better watch out, because she apparently never got the memo that GW cut Perils of the Warp from 40k 10th edition.

Yeah, we're gonna be seeing her Destroyer of the Fourth Wall aspect a lot once she shows up.

Discord is going to be asking some questions when he gets back, and Pinkie will be very slowly writing down a very long Party Pooper List? :rainbowderp:

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Discord knows what's happening on Equestria, but unfortunately for both him and his love, he has bigger fish to fry at the moment. As for Pinkie Pie... she already has a complete Party Pooper list, and all the Black Legionaires and their Aledari allies are already on it.

I find it ironic that Im listening to space cadet’s “Kill All Xenos” while reading this

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Congratulations; you’ve just stumbled upon one of the most profound ironies inherent to the Scions of the Konic’s rapidly-blossoming alliance with the ponies.

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The eldar would work with anyone if it would save them from sleness, but I don't know what's the big deal. She's not that bad or it's not that bad

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"She's not that bad?"
...evidently, you haven't read through the whole chapter yet.

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Comparably worse than her brothers. If I'm working for a chaos gods, I rather it be slowness

Fluttershy has begun her transformation into the Changeling Hunter from the season 5 finale.

Methinks the Chaplain is gonna get along juuuuust fine with the Changeling Hunter.

Some Aeldari...are worse than Drukhari. :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage:

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Arair isn't, not really. At least she has a reason for torturing Rainbow Dash beyond just "for the heck of it". A reason that may seem very, very stupid once it's revealed, mind you, but still.

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Ah, she has a 'reason'. So do the Drukhari as stupid as it is. And yet, they do not pretend themselves more noble than those they torture.

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At least she, unlike a lot of Drukhari, is doing it because she thinks it's necessary, and not because it's her idea of a fun time. And I wouldn't be surprised if a lot of Drukhari look at those they torture the same way Arair looks at the ponies.

Oh dear.

If he thinks Twilight is Cute, Applebloom will make him blow his Cogitator. :pinkiegasp:

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“He”, in this case, is Felix. And yes, Applebloom will do exactly that.

“Holy. Frak.” The Space Marine declared, his whole body trembling from excitement. “How. Is she. So. CUUUTE?! ”

Which chapter is this?

Is it who I think it is?

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It’s a character mentioned in the Dramatis Personae. The one that’s pathologically incapable of driving any sort of vehicle in a sane or reasonable manner.

Took the Iron Fortress months to get to that enviromental state. You cant say the Astartes aint efficient. :pinkiegasp:

Intresting magical conflict there. TimberJack on the way? :trixieshiftright:

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Well, the Iron Fortress was a purpose-built fortification, and not a barely-functional battleship forced to make a completely unplanned landing on a world without a drydock or anyplace resembling a proper starship landing location, so the comparison you’re making is a bit unfair.

No Timberjack upcoming. Let’s just say that the energies ponies use to power their magical abilities do not mix well with chaos.

I dont want to sound like that guy, but female astartes make my eye twitch, i am going to keep going. emperor preserve me.

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Severa technically isn’t female by a strict biological definition. She just preferred she/her pronouns before she became an Astartes, and that trait carried over when she was inducted into the Scions. Physically, she’s no different from any other astartes.

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I saw that in an author’s comment after I wrote it. And on thinking about it there is just no elegant way to write it in to the narrative I can think of, so it’s got to stay a note. The thought of trans marine… on one hand what do you call a space marine, what ever they want. On the other hand it’s likely going to be politically bothersome as the imperium is let’s say “opinionated’ on conformity.

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Well, GW has made it clear that the Imperium couldn’t care less about the gender identity of it’s citizens; as long as you’re worshipping the God-Emperor and obeying your superior’s orders, it doesn’t care what pronouns you use.

Felix, Battle Brother, pathologically incapable of driving any sort of vehicle in a sane and reasonable manner

oh joy, a "Driving Miss Daisy" in charge of one of the most powerful space wessels ever in 40K.

Black Legion Base of Operations, Canterlot's Former Location

The Black.Legion... how da fuck has Horus' boys even found Equuis?

so much of its decaying, rusting hull replaced over the years that it was up for debate whether it was still the same ship or not.

nod to the "ship of theseus paradox," nice.

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The Scions would like to know that too, as would the ponies. That question will be answered as the fic goes on.

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Just a heads up; you are seriously overestimating the current capabilities of the Unquestionable Perfection. It is far from being “one of the most powerful space vessels ever”.

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oh, so right now it's a Spacehulk in shape of a Gloriana? yikes.

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