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I kind of approve.
What's required of clop.
1. A backstory. you got a weak one, but MUCH better than nothing. Please try to sum it up with more than "shitty" next time. 1/2
2. A reason for the clop. You got that, even if i don't like that he uses RD as his sex slave (so to speak). 1
3. Having their reactions to it. It was primarilty focusing on the primal reactions of him, but i would stil say you got theri reactions. 1/2
so, you got 2 of 3. not to bad. try reaching 3 next time
1391398 ACTUALLY, what you need for clop is clop.
Good day sir
1391398>>1391450
Yeah, it's too bad people only want something to shake their cock at. They don't care.
I read:
...shitty day... ...shitty job....
and then I noticed is shit under my table. Dafuq?
1391450
Guys like you kill the comunity (no offense).
It is like saying "all you need for a soarindash is soarin and dash falling in love". do you expect it to be believalbe or even readable if every author had that as a moto? This is a site for Stories of a certan quality, not for the random crap every jackass could whip up in 10 minutes.
Being porno (clop) does not justify OOC charracters, a complete lack of story, terrible grammar and no sense of punctuation. Don't even try to argue about that. I don't want to bring out the BIG guns!
To the author: i DID NOT reffer to YOUR story here. i simply reffered to the average clop. some are better and some are worse. yours is above average.
EDIT:
1391519 glad someone agrees. a great clop is not just persons (or ponies) in motion. to many authors and READERS fail to see that. i don't.
an clop? IM ON IT
1391545
Just found your worst nightmare then.
Ok he's banned, but the horror!!!
Bronydragon
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1391398
Merci, dieu de la pornographie, pour votre sage jugement. Amen.
Histoire courte mignon. Short and cute. Not bad.
Not like any fanfiction (SFW or NSFW) needs a high quality set for it. It's all just something to pass time and express one's degree of artistic ability.
1392093 I am not a god, but i am glad that you appreciate it. You are one of those that have the capability to write some damn good stories. keep it up
1392093WTF
I like it
fake and gay
Well
I say this needs to go more then one chapter
I mean now like now if there is someone reading this make the second story now damn it 
Could use more. Felt like it ended pretty abruptly.
3413043 dude, really? Fake? I had no idea this wasn't real! Oh my god! And I didn't know it was gay to get head unless it was a guy! Learn something new everyday
Muffins!!!!