• Member Since 6th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Feb 17th, 2015

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Just a story I wrote and fixed but deleted by accident due to not understanding how this website does things. Anyway its a first person romance human X Pinkie. No clop

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Tis my first story that will be staying. I do enjoy hearing ways to improve my writing and I will take them to heart. Look for my new Fic "The Traitor" coming soon!

Short, simple, sweet, to the point, no clop. This is a winner in my book!

The story was fine. But this seriously needs a proof reader :facehoof:

1527750 Elaborate?

1526831 It's a pleasure to meet a fellow scientist.

How do you do?

1618976 Im very fine my good sir, and you?

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My life is doing exquisitely. Thank you very much for asking.

Pretty nice, but definitely need paragraphs.

Needs paragraphs.

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