Hearth's Warming. A time for family, parties, shopping...and stress, especially for those ponies who are shopkeeps, department store workers...and bakers. And nopony is better at hiding her stress behind a bright smile and a bubbly attitude than the town's resident Party Pony. But one shy, yellow pegasus isn't so easily fooled.
And this year, she plans to do something about it.
Written for snappleu for Jinglemas 2022
under the prompt:
I’d love to have a Fluttershy x Pinkie Pie fic! Those two are my favorites!
Hope you like it! Merry Christmas Happy Hearth's Warming!
Chapters (3)
nice ship
this is ADORABLE
You know, Fluttershy actually probably could intimidate Spoiled Rich into behaving. Me thinks Spoiled Rich would be powerless by something as potent as "The Stare".
So, I'm guessing this is before Starlight Glimmer joins the group?
Don't think I've seen a FlutterPie fic in years, let alone a well written one like this. Very nicely done.
I'M GONNA CRY. This was fantastic and super sweet and adorable!! Thank you so much for this cute 'lil story!!
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(smile) You're very welcome, dearest!
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Thank you, so so much!
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Heh...that's what I was going for! Thanks for reading!
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Indeed! Pinkie has always been Best Pony for me, and Fluttershy? She's just TOO CUTE!!
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Correct! Glim Glam and Trixie would probably have been funnier to include, but I wanted to keep the focus on Flutter Butter and Ponks.
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True, very true, but given 'Shy's reluctance to use that power on other ponies (as we've only seen her threaten to use it on the CMC, and that was only in jest) it's very unlikely she'd ever do it.
This was adorable. I love how you didn't show Fluttershy's meltdown, shall we say, just the aftermath of well-behaved and intimidated ponies. The ending was the cherry on the beautiful sundae.
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That's very kind of you to say! Yes, like Flutters herself, I didn't want to show her going nuts "on camera," as I thought it would be more effective and more endearing to show her reaction to it afterward. Some things are best left to the readers' imagination.
And I'm glad you loved the ending...that was indeed the reaction I was hoping for!