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Serina


Sipping iced coffee, penning pony tales, and spreading love—embracing the sweetness of existence, one adventure at a time! (CLOSED) Kofi! Commissions!

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Twilight Sparkle stumbles upon another dimension, where she finds herself transformed into a plush unicorn on a wintery island filled with forgotten toys. Stripped of her magic, Twilight befriends rag dolls, wind-up toys, and misfit wonders as she searches for her friend and a way back home.


Part of Serina's Hearth's Warming Eve Collection for 2023.

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Holy moly that title just sent my nostalgia in OVERDRIVE haha

HEY, I OWN THAT VERSION OF RUDOLPH ON DVD! GREAT STORY!😇

Hmm, this was fine, but, ah, was it written by AI? There were just some strange things about it, like constantly switching Smarty Pant's gender, Twilight saying I'm a toy in a "panic and amused(?) voice," her saying she misses her magical fur. Just a lot of little oddities.

If anything, some editing would certainly help.

I always wondered why that one doll was on the island. There doesn't seem to be anything wrong with her.

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Same!

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Thank you! I need to get a christmas collection on DVD still..

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Nope. I actually rewrote the story three times. Once in Novemberand twice in December. First draft didn't have smarty pants then 2nd draft did then I messed up because I thought smarty pants was a boy. I thought I removed all the "hims" and "hes" but I'll go back through and look. I definitely should have proof read it a bit more but I ran out of time 😅

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Yeah there is actually a reason explaining it on the wiki of her character. It was really interesting to research each character while writing this! I learned a lot!

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