Comet has been granted a new opportunity in life. For as long as he can remember, he has always wanted to explore the world outside of Starlight Ridge and see what it is like. But that dream has always been that: a dream. But what happens when dreams become reality and he finally gets the chance to pursue a new path with Violet Frost’s blessing? What will he do with it?
He doesn’t have the answer. But perhaps Izzy can guide him to it…
A/N: Episode 1 of the G5 Supplementary Universe. Featured on Fimfiction’s List of Stories On The Homepage: November 28, 2023
Sequel: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546707/what-makes-a-leader
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Really got nothing else to say other than a very well done story
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Thanks! It feels so good to dip my hooves back in the standalone fics territory. I have a lot more creative freedom that way.
New ship unlocked. Thanks for your work, sir. 🫡
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You’re welcome. I can’t wait to see what kind of trend this sets in regards to other stories centered around Comet. Hopefully the admins will take notice soon.
Well, so much for me being the first one to add a story to this group. That's what I get for being lazy.
Yeah, this was definitely more a friendshipping fic than a romantic one, but like you said, this was your first. I'm sure you'll improve in that regard.
And I totally relate to Comet here. It can't be easy falling into a new environment and not knowing what you want to do with your life. But as long as you have someone by your side, it's easier.
Very cute one shot. Nice work!
Great story, I loved it, and yeah comet does need his own tag.
I was waiting for a story about this character aka best character of the special. Thank you good sir.
Now G5 has a Mane 7, it seems.
Starlight Glimmer managed to avoid being a Poochie. We'll see if this https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Keet will as well.
This was such a great story!
And probably he's just homesick that he's in a different new world
Yeah we remember back in New Generation how everybody reacted to you
I think everyone got shipping senses tripped with these 2. I know my Ship warning light was on. Good work on this piece
Awwww this was an adorable story and this is actually the first ever shipping story between izzy and the new character comet which he is a pretty interesting guy here hopefully we get to see more of him around but anyway it feels like Comet has been feeling self-down and now that homesick and thinking that he made a mistake of leaving his home but then izzy saw him and asking if he's okay and despite that he told her the truth about he fell out of place and he really don't know what to do and he felt like he should just head home which izzy didn't want him to do she even told him some experience about being out of place but yet no matter how bad it was she kept going and maybe With a Little Help from A friends maybe he won't be alone and he felt something about izzy probably more than being just a friend but it looks like he decided to stay here to find out what his purpose of life like I said try to take it slow and easy I'm sure he'll find it sooner or later again this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work
Honestly, if there is one thing MLP excels at, it's quickly getting the audience invested in new characters.
After seeing Secrets of Starlight and the fact we see Izzy and Comet have some silly interaction i already knew a mile away that someone is gonna make a ship fic about it
I already ship Comet and Izzy.
This was a sweet little story. Comet really looks like he'll be a great addition to the cast.
Beware comet! get too close to the main cast could have you end up like flash sentry and timber spruce! Beware the ill omens of canonical chemistry!
Cheese sandwich gets a pass though, It's almost a badge of honor to say you had your ship sunk by Weird Al of all people.
Nice story. I’m looking forward to seeing more of Comet in the future.
aw, very sweet story :3 glad I got recommended to review it
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1039659/a-passing-comet-admiral-producer-random-recommendations-in-50-words-13
Since this story is now a part of the Supplementary Universe, are you gonna find a way to explain why Comet's not around anymore?
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I’ve been thinking of something to explain his absence away that would fit within canon, but honestly, I still can’t think of anything that would justify it in a plausible manner. So there really is no way of addressing it in my stories that would be believable to readers. The best I can do is ignore it until the show decides to have Comet reappear (if he ever does), and then have a potential follow-up story say that he was here the whole time and nopony noticed. But I doubt that’s ever going to happen because Season 2 hates Comet for some inexplicable reason.
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Well, well, well…
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If that means you have something planned, then I'm very interested to see what it is.
So good to see Comet again!
Well... she wears at least PART of her purpose in LIFE on one hip, just like most adult Ponies in this era (IE Misty is only known counter-example). Are you trying to imply that Auricorns work differently? That his Mark is for cocoa soaking and Sunny out does him in it? That a Mark is a relatively small part of Purpose?
Any combination of one or more of the above could work, but I am curious for an answer either in the text or here in the comments.
...Says the 3+ time hero (Reunification, Opaline, Alhura(sp?))... Or does this fall under many heroes saying "But... I just did what anyone would have done, right?"