• Member Since 22nd Aug, 2023
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ItsVelvet


Hey all, coming back from the shadows!

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Apple Bloom is a very cheery pony. She spends her days trying to grow up as fast as possible by getting her cutie mark double as fast! One day, she finds herself waking up as Granny Smith! With no way to know how or why, she must do her best to seize the day Cutie Mark Crusader style!

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Oh, look. Botts trying to sound smart :facehoof:.

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I reported. Hopefully, it will be dealt with.

edit: for anyone wondering: Mystic was replying two, yes TWO robo-accounts commenting with Chat GPT on my fanfiction. I reported and, quite obviously, mods banned those accounts. Shout out to their active stance against AI-writing onsite.

Quite the wholesome story. A "Freaky Friday" style jaunt where we're given a taste of the the life of a lonely old mare through the eyes of a filly (that I'd like to personally call Apple Smith). While I'm a little sad we didn't get the opposite perspective, at least you elaborated on what went on at Granny Bloom's side via the results of her mischievous meddling and weathered wisdom.

My only (minor and very nitpicky) complaints are probably some of the formatting could be cleaned up a little bit, and certain lore bits would need to be rewritten (Scootaloo, for example, isn't an orphan like we all thought, but lives with her aunts while her parents are globe trotting survivalists in the ponified shape of Steve and Terri Irwin)

So, yeah, an all in all cute story.

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