Hey all, coming back from the shadows!
What is reality when it is all about you?
What is power when you lose all of control?
What is space when everything is in a loop?
What is time when you can’t remember?
What is mind when all matter is lost?
Join Rarity as she descends into uncontrollable madness and fights for her sanity.
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Should of gone with the dragon...
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Thank you, guinea pig.
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Mr sandman
Man me a sand
Make him the cutest man car door hook hand
I don't understand this story, but I find it very terrifying because of how nonsensical( not in a bad way ) it is. Love it!<<333
I have mixed feelings about this story. You did a good job of conveying the surreal situations of the story, with engaging prose and appropriately thrilling presentation, but it felt like there wasn't much else going for it. You're 7k words into this story, and you haven't really done anything except present a bunch of disturbing visuals and situations without establishing an actual story as a foundation. As such, this feels a bit style-over-substance, which doesn't hook me as much as a more conventional story might.
It verry much follow the trend of a dream, or a nightmare, the unspoken woes of the waking world haunting the weary.
It was an intriguing read, thank you.