• Member Since 3rd May, 2014
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xStellar_Bubbles


A derp trying to make sense of reality.

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Scootaloo believed that it would be all over. She thought she has faced her fears, and that's it. But, Scootaloo doesn't realize there's another fear about to be born in her subconscious mind, waiting in the depths of the Everfree Forests...

Author's Note: Happy Nightmare Night everypony!

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 12 )

"Hey guys, do you think you're all already for another legend?"

*ready

"But, isn't it fun to be scaried, though? Pinkie Pie said that!"

Sure that shouldn't be "scared"?
(Besides, you managed to misspell Apple Bloom.)

Ends a bit abruptly. Besides, I think you'll need someone to look over the second chapter. (Don't ask me. I have a feeling something's wrong but I can't put my finger on it.)

5200871 Wow, why didn't I see those mistakes before? :facehoof: But, thank you for telling me anyways! :pinkiesmile:

What is this a crossover of?

5201655 You can edit your stories using google docs.

5398237 The cover art should've given you a hint. This is a crossover of Slender Man, or in this case for this story, I portray him in the pony form, Slendermane.

5398240 Or, I could just edit the chapter normally by clicking on it. I don't even have Google Docs.

Oh Shit!:twilightoops: That wasn't what I was expecting! Earned the dark tag.:rainbowderp:

5476563 Hehe, well what were you expecting? :pinkiesmile:

5476575 I wasn't expecting a happy ending to this story, but how it ended caught me off guard. I've learned not to try and predict anything with a dark tag, but that was definitely unexpected what happened to Scootaloo. I love dark stories.:pinkiecrazy:

5476585 I'm sorry, but I don't understand the point you are making. I tend to misunderstand things a lot. :twilightblush:

5476637 I was expecting somepony to die, I just didn't think it would be that graphic.:twilightoops: I've read some violent endings on this site and that made it in the top ten I think.:pinkiesad2: What got me was nopony seemed all to eager to find out what was responsible for the murder (I wouldn't question it normally, but it was Scootaloo and Dash saw what was left. I figured she would be sad for a moment then get really angry and go after what was responsible:applejackunsure:).

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