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Keep moving forward.

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One lazy night, not unlike many others, Rarity reads and comes to a stark realisation.

An entry into the Quills and Sofas L Contest 2023.

Rated T for alcohol and very veiled suggestive references.

Cover art by Lionylioness, and can be found here.

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Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

:twilightangry2: $100 bit fine for vandalizing that book!
:raritystarry: Wut? I only made it better to fit the story
:twilightoops: Make it 500!
:raritycry: That's not right, Spike burns up books all the time. That's worse!
:twilightsmile: Spike owns the Library
:duck: Really?
:facehoof: Oh I can see it coming already...
:raritywink: 🎶 Spikey Wikey 🎶
:trollestia: That's my boy!

The shade thrown at dash! Lol

nice fic, the only issue I have with it (something I fall into a lot in my own writing) is the over used comma splicing does take me out of the fic at points.

Besides that, it was good :twilightsmile:

Really cute story. Nice to get some stories with lesbian thoughts in a setting where that isn't expected sometimes. Hopefully Rarity goes for it!

If anyone wants to learn how to write Rarity, they should read this story. I love this one.

Short but interesting.

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