Professional Fitting

Twilight is struggling to adjust to her new duties as the Princess of Friendship, being saddled with mounds of work in an unfamiliar new home. Rarity arrives on routine business at what is perhaps a bad time.

Written for the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Passion for Fashion contest with the prompt, Faux pas.

Thanks to Stinium_Ruide for editing.

Thanks to heLegendaryBillCipher for the audio reading!

Cover image was made by me with screenshots found on the Friendship is Magic wiki.

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Snow Quill

Snow Quill #1 · Feb 13th, 2021 · 2 · ·

I really liked this story and it really made me feel when I read it during the contest. Your descriptions of Twilight's state are amazing and the awkwardness of the kiss was well written as well. I sure hope Rarity and Twilight can move past this, they are just so cute!

Nailah

Nailah #2 · Feb 13th, 2021 · 2 · ·

I really enjoyed this story during the contest. The way you used the subtleness of the emotions to truly impact the reader felt fresh and engaging. Let's hope these two friends can move past the awkwardness of what's occurred and be able to move to an even stronger bond between the two. Great work!

Lore Horse

Lore Horse #3 · Feb 15th, 2021 · · ·

Well..... That was abrupt......

The Red Parade

The Red Parade #4 · Apr 21st, 2021 · · ·

Cute beginning! Definitely wish it went on for a little bit longer but that's what EU is for. Great stuff so far, even if it wanders a bit towards the beginning!

Atom Smash

Atom Smash #5 · Apr 24th, 2021 · · ·

This was a really cute thing to read. I absolutely adore the awkwardness that builds between them. Very relatable to anyone who's had a crush I should think.

SigmasonicX

SigmasonicX #6 · Apr 29th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Reflecting what others have said, the ending was quite abrupt. I found it hard to tell what the story was going for as a result. You did a good job conveying the characters' emotions, though.

Shaslan