Pinkie Pie regularly goes out of her way to make her friends feel good. Every one of them thanks her in their own way, but she wasn't expecting Twilight's simple little gesture to leave her so utterly and thoroughly confused.
Written for the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Publish-A-Story Contest with the prompt 'It was only a kiss'.
Thank you to applezombi, AuroraDawn, Exodd and Holtinater for reading over this fic in the contest.
Thanks to StraightToThePointStudio for the audio reading!
Thanks to Rainbow Infinity for another audio reading.
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Adorable.
Look at that! Smooth mare Twilight
this was so cute, nicely done!
This was nice, though Twilight's kiss was kind of sudden and she never gave a reason.
Thank you for this story. I read it in the morning, and it made me feel better about the day.
A warm and well written story.
Incoherent screaming!
Garbled praise!
This opening made my heckin' day all by itself. Thank yoooo!
All right. That was incredible. You really nail Pinkie's voice. Much praise!
Little short, but very nice.
Awwwwwww
Dawhh! The whole way through, this story warms up the heart! All the cute moments mixed in with the humor really does make this a great flippin' read! Hope ya didn't mind, but I simply had to make a reading of this adorable lil' story!
Audio Linkyloo!: https://youtu.be/1IOxlGROSU4
(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)
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I absolutely do not mind in the slightest! Oh my gosh thank you, I can't wait for the video to go up proper!
Cute as heck.
Also, good job testing your hippopotamus, Pinkie!
You need more than 2 data points. For science!
D'awwwwwww. More, please.
You keep testing the hypotenuse, Pinkie.,.. You keep—
Wait, that would imply a love triangle D: Dun dun dun!
;) This was a nice read. :3
ehehehehe I love me some Twinkie.
That was a really nice story. Short and sweet.
Very well done.
Loved this line. Super great characterization of Pinkie Pie in this story overall as well
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She was so much fun to write too!
Downright adorable and perfectly Pinkie. I really enjoyed it.
Did the beginning take inspiration from the "La Da Dee" music video? It sounded familiar.
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Took me a while to go ahead and read this, and I need to make a mental note not to procrastinate so much. This was just an adorable feel-good, and that's something I need quite a bit. Good on ya!
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This was a lot of fun to read. Sciency Pinkie is good Pinkie. (No, seriously, her trying to test a hippopotamus was hilarious. Or was it her hippocampus? The h-thing!
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It was great.
Thank you.
I have just one thing to say: D'AWWWWWWW.
I'm ALWAYS up for some Twinkie
I FORGOT TO LEAVE A DERPY
There we go :)
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My heart always lies with RariTwi but this was a stroke of brilliance that made me love TwiPie
Really cute! Loved Pinkie's idea of an experiment, and the kiss at the end was great.