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Catpaw616


I write pony fics for fun or when I’m bored. | Yes, I’m a Starlight Glimmer fan. How could you tell? | A fan of MLP since 2011.

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Unicorns have gone missing all across Equestria, and no one seems to know why.

After a talk with Princess Celestia, Twilight and Spike set out to find the cause of the disappearances. However, as the search continues, they encounter a potential companion...

Will Twilight and Spike's mission succeed? Or will they fail and be one of the victims?


Special thanks to Forcalor for coming up with the title!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Ponynappers! Hide away your foals!
A promising start, will wait for more :twilightsmile:

11568855
Thanks! New chapters will come not too soon 👍

Your grammar needs alittle work.

When you end a dialogue with a period, but intend to identify the speaker afterwards, then you turn that period into a comma. For example:

"There. That's where we're going next." He told them.

Would actually be:
"There. That's where we're going next," he told them.

Question marks and exclamation points stay the same though. But the first word of the next sentence that identifies the speaker is still lowercase.

Hope that helps!

11569506
Yeah it does. Thanks for the help!

Let me know when you see any more of these errors. I greatly appreciate it

Or Spike could just send a message via dragonfire.

And Twilight could put a homing device/spell on Rarity, Sweetie Belle, their parents, and maybe the unicorn colts at school?

What's the alternate universe tag for?

11570214
Starlight will be introduced later on in this story, and her "villain arc" will be a bit different

11570036
They didn't have time to write a letter supposedly

Poor Rarity. I wish Celestia would take these things more seriously. There are more important things going on then her ego.

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