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WhispersInTheDark
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WhispersInTheDark
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I'm a big fan of the animation you've... adapted here. Honestly, you didn't add much. The new scenes were a nice addition, but there wasn't nearly enough detail to titillate, let alone arouse.
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Maybe the scenes were titillating, but you're simply too...(wait for it)...JADED?!
Love that animation!
Was planning on doing a fanfic adaptation of it myself! Can't wait to see part 2!
I am almost positive I read this same story a year or more ago
trying to think of the animation.
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Might possibly have watched it as a video instead, given what the author and others have said.
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I know it was from Canary Primary
11551416
Well, bud...since this wasn't a commission, your personal preferences hold little sway.
And besides, if luvin' ponies is wrong, I don't wanna be right!
11551127
Wait what animation?
Is it bad that I thought of this animation just by seeing the title, coverart and a single tag? And then I was proven right by reading the description?
...dammit. Every day I fall further into the depths of the internet... also, it's not that hard to find. One of very few that isn't "source filmmaker 3d" style.
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Dude...the author made reference to it in the description, and several commentators have as well.
Oh man, a fic based on that animation? I couldn't possible pass this up!
Not really that hard to find, especially if you know the right tags to search for on Derpibooru heh...
Kinky!
11551817
Oh now I see it.
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Link please
11551962
Tags perhaps?
11551962
Can you at least link the artist or tags at least?
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If you so wish, here's the ranch sauce:
2982056
Found it within 5 minutes lol
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Thanks.
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True, I think 90% of the time Anthro and Human stories miss the point of this fandom being called My Little Pony.
This fic is an excellent idea, but it doesn't really add anything to the animation other than Pinkie, which mostly rips dialogue from one of Canary's other animations. It would be nice to see some of the missing scenes, like the time between the intro and the actual sex, after the animation, Or new scenes altogether.
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If by that you mean there's another video with those intro scenes and I somehow missed it, I have some hunting down to do! But, if you mean "somebody" (hint hint) should write those scenes...you know what? That is an EXCELLENT idea...I think I will get right on that...
After watching the *ahem* ‘animation’, I’m already turned the fuck on again... Welp! A cloppers gotta do what a cloppers gotta do!
Where can I find the porn
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You'll have to follow the clues the other commentators have left, for as I've mentioned more than once, it's NSFW and therefore can't be linked.
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Exactly. All you did here, other than adding Pinkie, is just repeat Canary's animation in text. If you want to write extended scenes or add new scenes entirely (especially in the time skip), this could be spectacular.
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What is this 'time skip' of which you speak?
And no, you're incorrect: I did NOT simply repeat Canary's animation in text. That would be stealing. I did use some lines directly from the video, only because they were super hot, ( such as Rarity's opening line with the Dogs...no WAY I was going to change that one! That still gives me shivers!) but I embellished the rest, and is also why I referenced the porn in my description, though I couldn't link it. I'm also working on the prequel as we speak, and I've titled it Non-Aggression Pact: The Prelude. I have over 2k words written already, with the addition of some surprising characters and scenes. The only thing stopping me from completing it is my frail, Human body that insists on sleeping and eating because this tale has me gripped in such a way that I have to finish it. That, and I have some popular stories on my alt account I have to finish as well. It's one of the curses of being bipolar.
I haven't felt this fired up about this many stories in years, so Prelude should be out no later than Monday, April 10th at the latest. After that, I'll finally get some more work done on the next chapter of Choices.
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That's fantastic! By time skip, I mean whatever happened in between the opening scene in Twilight's castle and the smash cut to the porn in the cave. It would be nice to see more of what led to the orgy and more extended scenes before and during the porn.
I'm glad you're taking the constructive criticism to heart and I can't wait to read what you come up with. This was a great start with a ton of potential :-)
Ah, yes. The talented CanaryPrimary.
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Can you explain how those numbers work?
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https://derpibooru.org/images/1271734
Here's a g-rated picture with a bunch of numbers in the link I'm posting for no particular reason.
you've got good taste, i'v seen that animation its one of the better spicy mlp animations out there. so funny to see a smut fic based on a smut video lol
11552317 You can find it on Derpi at 2982056.
This was a great adaptation to the animation this is related too.