I, Sweetie Bot

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Sweetie Bell isn't a robot, right?

My entry into the Science Fiction Contest II, with special thanks to my proof reader, gapty.

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Reba_McIntosh

Reba_McIntosh #1 · Apr 3rd, 2023 · 1 · 1 ·

Ooooh, this was a good read! Short but sweet (literally, I suppose) and a very interesting ending. Nice work!

SparklingTwilight

SparklingTwilight #2 · Apr 3rd, 2023 · 1 · 1 ·

Very interesting! This has some (perhaps intentionally) open-ended questions that are ominous, which makes this an exciting approach. Questions like: why would Sweetie have thought Twilight told her she was real (was it a mistake? Does Twilight have a secret agenda) and whether even Twilight and Rarity are real ponies(!)

new55

new55 #3 · Apr 3rd, 2023 · 1 · 1 ·

That was a good story.

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #4 · Apr 3rd, 2023 · 1 · 1 ·

“I just…I…” Sweetie Bell then took a deep breath before continuing, “I think that I might be a real pony.”

I think I might not be a real pony

MatTheBook

MatTheBook #5 · Apr 3rd, 2023 · 2 · ·

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They are all robots!!

but then that gives questions

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #6 · Apr 3rd, 2023 · 4 · 1 ·

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Aw, thank you!

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But raising more questions than answers in half the fun...

Partycannon_

Partycannon_ #7 · Apr 4th, 2023 · 3 · 1 ·

Fun story, Sweetie Bot reads are always a blast!

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #8 · May 29th, 2023 · 2 · 1 ·

“But I’m not!” Sweetie Bell snapped. Rarity winced. “I-I’m not a machine! I’m botanic!”
“Organic.”
“Huh?”
“I believe that the word you are looking for is organic.”

augh this is such a Rarity and Sweetie Belle interaction that it hurts

Sweetie Bell watched as her sister shook her head. “Darling, of course you don’t have any buttons or wires. Why would anypony design you to look that way? It would be so unfashionable!”

aww, it would!