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Axolotl222


I read, write, and make plans for world domination. Not always in that order.

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“That was… awful.”

And it was. Truly awful. Possibly one of the worst books she had ever read.

Geez, that's probably the funniest way this whole saga could've capped itself off.
:rainbowlaugh:

Thanks for the fun read!

Yep this is going to be one of my favorites!

Twilight smiled as she watched her leave, before turning her attention back to her book. She couldn’t help letting out a little giggle. Twilight had always loved reading ever since she was a foal, but since becoming a princess she had found herself lacking the time to read as much as she wanted. Now, after weeks of waiting, she was finally going to read a new book again.

I can relate to this: I've had less time to read than I used to.

This is written so well, it could've been a really good MLP episode.

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Sometimes the best endings are a little anticlimactic :twilightblush:
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Thank you for that.
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Wow. That's honestly one of the highest praises I could get. I don't know what to say... um... here, have a Derpy :derpyderp1:

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Sometimes the best endings are a little anticlimactic :twilightblush:

Sometimes we enjoy the journey more than the destination.

Lol, all that for a terrible book. Poor Twilight. :twilightblush:

Twilight groaned from the effort of trying to carry both Fluttershy and Rarity as she flew.

Ah, lovely! I get so annoyed when Fluttershy doesn't use her wings, but we've seen she's perfectly capable of strong flying.
Though I can't help but laugh about the one time she almost fell to her doom, and some pegasi saved her then looked at her like "Bruh, the two feathered things attached to you work perfectly fine."

Twilight then noticed the letter clutched in her assistant's claws. “It’s from the Princess,” he said nonchalantly. “She says she needs to know if you’re available right now. Something about a magic rock”

… missing period

“ Oh no, is Equestria secretly run by an evil cabal of lizard ponies-”

Okay, you got a genuine laugh out of me with that.

Cute little story.

your fanfic is so good that I read it 3 times without realizing it, good job! :heart: :twilightblush:

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Fixed, Thanks for pointing that out
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:pinkiehappy:

I don't get it. This is just your everyday Twilight Sparkle :twilightsheepish:
It was a very enjoyable read. Had a laugh at the end.

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Glad to make you laugh

Funny one, thanks for the little chaotic tale.
But …… I found this.

“You sure? You seemed a little… quite today. I-if you don’t mind me saying so.”

That "quite" should be "quiet".

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Ugh... I always mix those two up!

Most troubling of all, however, were the multiple fires off in the distance, their flames reaching worrying heights in spite of the Pegasi frantically trying to put them out.

Not sure if pegasi should be capitalized. You don't capitalize "human" in the middle of a sentence.

She reappeared a few feet away from her bed, falling onto her but with an undignified squawk.

Is that supposed to be "butt", as in her buttocks/rear, or an auto correct mishap when you tried to type "back"?

A stepped closer, allowing Twilight to get a better look at its lumpy flesh, seeing that its body was actually composed of…

Should be either "it stepped closer" or "a step closer".

Twilight sighed, rubbing the bridge of her muzzle with a hoof. She was really getting too old for this.

Nice story picture!:twilightsmile:
It's cute!:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

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Howdy howdy! Thanks for the kind words... and for pointing out some typos for me to fix :twilightblush: And yes, that was a Lethal Weapons joke.

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