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Rainbow Dash hates losing. Yet no matter how hard she tries, Pinkie Pie always manages to somehow one-up her when it comes to pranks...

...until one day, when she finally manages to prank more ponies than Pinkie. Her latest prank, however, does not turn out the way she expected...

Rated Teen for moderate sexual content

Now with a dramatic reading, courtesy of the amazing Skijarama

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This was a nice and enjoyable read overall. I was wondering why Fluttershy of all ponies. Now I know :rainbowlaugh:

Dang. Part of me wanted that to actually be Fluttershy.

I love it when a plan comes together ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )

“You silly-willy. Of course I need to thank you! If it wasn’t for you Ponyville might of lost it's prank master!” Pinkie then gasped. “Oh. My. Gosh. We should team up together every year! We’d be unstoppable!”

No apostrophe. Should be "its"

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Thanks. Ugh, somehow I always miss one.

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It's the :flutterrage:English language. Nouns indicate possessive form by adding 's. Pronouns do not. However, adding 's to a pronoun is usually a valid contraction so Spellcheck doesn't catch it.

Loved the dramatic reading 🥰

What a great story! :yay:

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