Not bad.

not bad at all

Funny and hot, with some surprises I did not see coming!

Well-written smut, very funny ending! That closet will never be the same.

I've never been the biggest fan of the whole "holding hands is lewder than sex"-style humor that's going on with the smut films contrasting against Mac having been in an actual royal orgy, but it was almost worth it just for the phrase "adulterous boop."

Big Mac frowned. These weren’t real sex noises! He could tell Kyrie was pretending for the picture. He didn’t like that one bit! Pretending was too much like lying, and it meant he wasn’t really pleasing his lover.

Then better work hard and make them do real sex noises!

He let himself go, fucking with an abandon he hadn’t felt since that strangely realistic dream with Princess Luna.

I still believe there is more behind this that it seems...

He felt Candy’s tongue swirl around his bouncing nuts, her fingers gently running through his tail hair and stroking his dock and taint. To devote all his attention to the pleasure of one mare, yet to have a second focused solely on pleasing and teasing him — it was more than a guy like him deserved!

Don't sell yourself short, you do deserve it.

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

Also, very unexpected ending. But in a good way!

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On a side note, what's the chance the Luna in his dream was more than just his imagination?

Big Mac suspects nothing, and neither should you.

Candy, eh? That good that true names came out!

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Sharp eye, you found the parts where I didn’t change the character’s name.