• Member Since 26th Jul, 2021
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Pillowfight


Call me Cheese Sandwich, cause I'm here to make you laugh!

Comments ( 8 )

Very nice. Very nice.

Wonder if they got knocked up

Wait, who did Big Mac marry?

Absolutely have to comment on this-
I'm not particularly fond of incest, however, the writing was incredibly fun, so you have earned yourself a follow. It had just the right amount of fast paced randomness while still landing just about every joke. Despite that, the structure remained sturdy the whole way through, making it wild but super enjoyable. My only real criticism is that the profanity felt a little unnatural & threw me off a bit.
(Oh, and, I really didn't read the sex scene at the end, but my compliments apply regardless ^^')

... But why 😵‍💫.

That was damn funny, with a nice hot finale, too!

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Did you miss the "contest entry" part?

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