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Nice. I wish you were bit more descriptive with how stuff looked and felt, but otherwise it's perfect. Great job, 10/10 will clop again.
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I do tend to be rather terse. I'm working on it! Brevity is great, but sometimes one wants more. Especially in porn.
Thanks tho!
Unnff need me a girl like Twi to sassily lovingly dom me.
8821474 Yeah, kind of just gotta second this. Still awesome and sexy though.
This is an amazing premise for a story though very unlikely. I like it.
Is this anthro or feral? Half the descriptions seem like anthro and half like feral
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Feral.
Nice story! Hey, can you tell me what artist did that beautiful cover art?
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I Draw Stuff? mlpanonart dot tumblr dot com. I had it linked, but someone pointed out that you can see her naughty bits in uncropped the original.
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Thanks mate
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Pretty much completely unrealistic in ever possible way, yes.
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Brevity is great, and rather hard to pull off. Having just enough description is always better than having too much of it. You are doing pretty good job with it.
Bleh
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Thank you for that incisive and intelligent feedback.
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Thank you!
I take everything I write (even very silly porn) quite seriously.
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Inn glad you took it with humor.
Few do!
The story was just crazy! Impossible. Illogical... Silly! 😄
Hey do you know who did the coverart?
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mlpanonart dot tumblr dot com
It's not 100% sfw so I took the link off.
Old favorite of mine.
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Authorial intent.
Hey, this was good. Would've been even better if Shinning and Big Mac had made out a little bit. Like when Mac was blowing his top while they were going at Flutters from both ends. A little bit of Shinning/Mac spit swapping during that bit would've been the cherry on top of the sundae.
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You are correct. Seriously what was I thinking?
I have written several ShinyMacs, tough. You know. A Night in Shining Armor, The Emperor's Concubine, and Bi Dad's Club.
Why do people use the word "Ponut"? It's awful and such a turnoff.
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Its such a lovely piece of anatomy, though.
I write what I like to read. It may not be what you like to read. And that's okay!
*lowers hand again*
Wonder where he knows how said machine feels...
I like how you think.
I think she would either be horrified or proud.
for this, and for using the word "athwart", you shall have my fave
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For noticing the two things in this story I felt most clever for including, you have my eternal gratitude.
Fun fact: The line in the first draft was "hung like a couple of [country metaphors]." I often do stuff like this if I'm hung up on something (like Applejack's dialect) that threatens to break my flow. In the second draft, I decided just taking the brackets off was funnier than anything else I was likely to think of.
The more you know!
This is so over the top and silly, yet still remains arousing in a way.
I'm impressed
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Anything that can be criticized is not a 10/10. What would you rate it if it improved?
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I Really see nothing that could be easily improved, that is not nitpicky preference that depends on subjective tastes.
Only thing that would make this better would be more of it, and more story would still be 10/10.
Its like eating Ice cream or cookies. Sure you might enjoy extra chocolate, or rum on them, but if they are really good, and you eat them (/read them).
Also 11/10 is a thing.
Ha... New word
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New as in Shakespeare never used it1. Old enough to be a in joke on Urban Dictionary.
Don't let people start saying I made it up plz.
1 That I know of.