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Lets Do This


We're going to build an exact copy of Ponyville... right over there! We've got less than a minute!

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This story is a sequel to What Nightmares Fear


Twilight and her Advanced Projects team are asked to put on the Hearth's Warming Eve pageant. So they decide to modernize it a bit. And discover there's a lot more to the simple play than they expected...

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For more of this series, start with: A Canterlot Engagement.

Also, check out the entire series, beginning with Not Exactly Friends.

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oh fuck the hell yes, there is more!
let me quickly upvote and favourite
before i get to reading this story.

"Well, it ought to be," Trixie huffed. "On any stage, there's just one star performer. And that's moi! "

I know who you're playing. Princess Platinum.:ajsmug:

"Yeah, I was gonna ask about that," said Moondancer. "The Princess does remember we're all unicorns, right? Isn't that going to be a little strange, us playing roles normally filled by earth ponies and pegasi?"

The unicorns wanted an all unicorn cast for this play. Recruiting you was Celestia's best idea for revenge.

In particular I want to play Chancellor Puddinghead. She was my favorite. She gets to spout a bunch of completely ahistorical nonsense, and do pratfalls, and basically keeps the audience in stitches. They say a good Puddinghead can save any performance of the pageant. I'd love the chance to do that."

Somewhere EQG Pinkie Pie is crying tears of joy and pride.

"That's the spirit!" Sunset elbowed her shoulder. "Spoken like a natural Smart Cookie."

Moondancer winced, and managed a small smile.

Sounds like there's a story there.:trixieshiftright:

"Actually," Twilight said, "I thought you'd be perfect as Commander Hurricane, leader of the pegasi. After all, the pegasi of that era were highly regimented and militaristic."

Sounds like a great fit!

"Oo-oooh!" Trixie brightened up immediately. "Well, of course! The Great and Powerful Lady Trixie shall present a dazzling Princess of the Unicorns!"

Called it!:pinkiehappy:

Twilight forced back a laugh. "I've always preferred Clover the Clever myself. It's said Clover was so diligent and creative a mage, he basically made Star Swirl's reputation! But of course, that's ridiculous," she added quickly. "Everypony knows Star Swirl was a genius all on his own."

Moondancer looked like she was about to say something, then thought twice of it and kept her mouth shut.

You'd better not be about to disrespect Starswirl. :twilightangry2: My stallion gets nothing but hate for implementing the same polices Twilight supported by the end of her reign, and at least he was consistent on the matter.

"The Great and Highly-Respected Princess Platinum approves!" Trixie grabbed Starlight in a tight hug with a hoof. "After all, her Regal Highness simply cannot be without her right-hoof mage and helper-pony. We'll knock 'em dead, bestie!"

Always the stagehand, never the lead. Not that she would ever want it any other way of course.

Twilight nodded. "Private Pansy of the pegasi." She shrugged resignedly. "It's okay. I'll be so busy organizing and managing this thing, it'll be good for me to have a lighter role to play."

You are pretty shy. Although personally, I would swap roles with Moon Dancer. It would seem to fit better.

"Is that backsliding I hear?" she growled, her snout inches from Twilight's. "Get a hold of yourself, Private! Or I'll have you court-martialed for insubordination! Drop and give me twenty!"

Then Tempest smirked. "What, too much?"

No I think that works. :twilightoops:

"Not necessarily..." Twilight read from the note. "My Dear Twilight: while I would never second-guess your own choices for the roles for this play, if you happen to need some advice..."

I mean you clearly don't though so...:unsuresweetie:

Twilight looked up from the note. "Celestia did mention she was hoping to persuade Luna to attend, as part of Luna's efforts to reintegrate in modern pony society. So I think we should try to accommodate any suggestions she has."

Why? Seriously why? :derpyderp1:

"As for the rest..." Twilight looked up from the list. "Sorry, Starlight, it looks like the Princess feels you might be a better choice as Smart Cookie."

Does Starlight look like a Smart Cookie to you?

"Huh! I take it all back." Trixie crossed her forehooves. "Her Royal Highness wouldn't know casting if she was flank-deep in a trout stream."

That's pretty funny.

"Yeah. It's just..." Twilight eyed Trixie doubtfully. Then she shook her head. "Whatever, we can make it work. Somehow."

But why bother? You know your group better than Celestia.

Starlight nodded. "And I can work on a glamour spell. To allow us to look like earth-ponies or pegasi as needed, while we're on stage.

Sounds pretty smart to me.

Or should we use practical costumes?

Why would that be a issue?

I wouldn't want the other tribes accusing us of cultural appropriation, or horn-washing, or the like."

"Hey I'll have you know that washing things by horn is a perfectly legitimate line of employment!" Soapy Bubbles: Unicorn Maid.

"It should be okay," Twilight said. "They know who we are. And it's important for us to properly represent the characters we're portraying."

Indeed.:rainbowdetermined2:

And Spike, we should send a note to Cheese Sandwich, see if he's available to manage the stage and props for us. I know he'd do a great job.

Oh yeah! We're getting the band back together!:raritystarry:

The rest of the group looked at each other uneasily. Somehow, the entire venture was feeling a little less exciting than before. Something felt off, definitely.

That'll happen whenever Celestia's massive snozzle is in play.:fluttershyouch:

reify your acting style

que? x.x
i assume that's supposed to read rectify?
but i don't get how that works in that context then?
probably because i am german and not a native
english speaker . .

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To "reify" means to make something more concrete or real -- in this specific case, to take just "acting" a part and turn it into fully "living" the part, so the audience reads it as more direct and believable.
(Insert Moondancer emoticon here.) :twilightsmile:

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Thanks much for the in-depth comments! :pinkiehappy:

Twilight looked up from the note. "Celestia did mention she was hoping to persuade Luna to attend, as part of Luna's efforts to reintegrate in modern pony society. So I think we should try to accommodate any suggestions she has."

Why? Seriously why? :derpyderp1:

A side-goal in this story (and perhaps Celestia's intent in her "advice") was to take the typical associations of the characters from previous stories (that is, Twilight/Tempest, Sunset/Moondancer, Trixie/Starlight) and deliberately shake them up a bit, forcing the characters to team up with ponies they don't usually hang out with, and thereby learn how to deal with that.

"As for the rest..." Twilight looked up from the list. "Sorry, Starlight, it looks like the Princess feels you might be a better choice as Smart Cookie."

Does Starlight look like a Smart Cookie to you?

Well, I did write a previous Starlight story (Starlight Breaks Magic) where she basically invents the Pony equivalent of Gödel's Incompleteness Theorem, so... yeah! :twilightsmile:

I wouldn't want the other tribes accusing us of cultural appropriation, or horn-washing, or the like."

"Hey I'll have you know that washing things by horn is a perfectly legitimate line of employment!" Soapy Bubbles: Unicorn Maid.

"Horn-washing" is a ponification of "White-washing", the practice (now rightly frowned on) of deliberately casting white actors as non-white characters in stage and screen roles. Starlight's just being the voice of cultural sensitivity here. (Twilight feels the same way, though for Twilight it's such a natural state of mind she doesn't feel it even needs saying. The world needs a few more Starlights calling attention to these things...)
:twilightoops:

A rime of ice

a rhyme? or rather a rim i guess?

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That one literally has a Germanic origin, so I'll let you look it up... :twilightsmile:

Honestly, Tempest and Starlight, you need to be more careful about casting spells on or near mysterious magical artifacts!

Oho, setting up for the Sombra arc, are we? I must say, I absolutely LOVE the idea of Luna holding her court in her own dream palace! Let Celestia keep her court in Canterlot, with all its stuffy nobles; THIS princess is in another, BETTER castle!

Something does indeed feel off. I blame Celestia. I know it's likely not intentional but she might be psyching them out a little bit, it's just a play. It's important to the ponies, of course, but in the end it is just a performance

That was a good story.

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...My guess is "refine"... Though, with the letters present, that doesn't make much sense. At least on the QWERTY keyboard layout, like I've got...

11497891
From what I understand, when water is cooled beyond its freezing point without freezing, also known as "supercooled water", then disturbed, it suddenly freezes, and if the supercooled water was in the form of droplets (as in a mist or fog), that's what's known as "rime". Apparently, the frost that appears on windows (for instance, the stuff you have to scrape off your car's windshield before it's safe to drive) is a form of rime.

Things are getting very interesting...

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Sorry. I should have replied way earlier. Apologies.

A side-goal in this story (and perhaps Celestia's intent in her "advice") was to take the typical associations of the characters from previous stories (that is, Twilight/Tempest, Sunset/Moondancer, Trixie/Starlight) and deliberately shake them up a bit, forcing the characters to team up with ponies they don't usually hang out with, and thereby learn how to deal with that.

Yeah, that's very much a Celestia move, now that I think about it.

Well, I did write a previous Starlight story (Starlight Breaks Magic) where she basically invents the Pony equivalent of Gödel's Incompleteness Theorem, so... yeah! :twilightsmile:

Well yeah, but isn't that a Clover the Clever thing? Smart Cookie is an earth pony, so I don't imagine her discovering universal truths of unicorn magic. I know Starlight's smart, but she's much more spell oriented than say Moondancer.

"Horn-washing" is a ponification of "White-washing", the practice (now rightly frowned on) of deliberately casting white actors as non-white characters in stage and screen roles.

I figured. I was making a joke.:rainbowwild:

Great job with the ending though. The twist is just another one of those fantastic mysteries which is part of the reason why I keep coming back to the series.

That and the character and world building obviously. The ending stinger is pretty enticing too. Looking forward to seeing more.

Thank you all, for knocking some sense into Twilight (and Trixie)!


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Rectify, possibly?

That was awesome! Loved it all, but what's this? A surprise twist?!

What thing?!! Lunaaa, waitttt!!

Love the apology scene.

But I don’t understand what made twilight go for the revised script.

Tempest's mage armor definitely played a role in how she acted. The disappearance of Palladium was caused by Sacanas after all.

At this point there is little for Trixie to keep from her friends given how little she's been told.

PHEEW! I've just finished all the AP series and I have to say this whole thing is ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! Thank you so much for such a great time I got while reading it! Now I want printed version on my bookshelf so badly! It deserves to be a real book!

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