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V-H-SClop

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Oops door
Oops door #4 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · 1 · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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"There's no reason to go so fast mate, we've got all night... I just hope your little friend can keep up with me", she used her helmet to masturbate him or at least try to masturbate since her helmet was small in comparison due to the size of his cock.

You say, helmet, Twice did you mean hooves?

Oops door
Oops door #5 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Most of the he her his him and she are mixed up I guess English is your first language, most likely using a gendered language and using Google translate, I’ll be deleting the other comments The story is good and so is the premise besides just the spelling errors are the only problem I see I’ll be reading the rest of the story whenever it comes out it’s good so far

V-H-SClop
V-H-SClop #6 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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11613451
Most of the errors that you pointed out, I have already corrected them, please let me know if there is another one.

Justalad 45
Justalad 45 #7 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Mind telling the Artist of the Cover image, please?thank you.

Questionmark x3
Questionmark x3 #8 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Really like the premise of this story. Love how Chrysalis is treated and would love to read more about how she was captured by her master.

Just got to fix a few of the mistakes like the Her and Him mixups. If that gets fixed by a pre reader looking over the story this would be an even better story.

V-H-SClop
V-H-SClop #9 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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I'm working on it, possibly on Friday there will be an edited version, but thanks for commenting.

Questionmark x3
Questionmark x3 #11 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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11613511
cant wait to read where the story goes in the future. :raritystarry:

hades21
hades21 #12 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Her prayer is interrupted when a large shadow looms over her. Applejack turns quickly to find the tip of a large, hard, veiny cock pricking his cheek. The raccoons take the opportunity to flee the scene, leaving the mare with the creature to fend for itself.

Her prayer is interrupted when a large shadow looms over her. Applejack turns quickly to find the tip of a large, hard, veiny cock pricking her cheek. The raccoons take the opportunity to flee the scene, leaving the mare with the creature to fend for itself.

hades21
hades21 #13 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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The demon monster on the other hand didn't have any scratches and was already victorious sampling the sweet apple cunt with the mare's butt in front of his face while her upper body was dangling with the veiny cock right in front of AJ who blushed at the sight. the thick, hard stick in front of his eyes.

The demon monster on the other hand didn't have any scratches and was already victorious sampling the sweet apple cunt with the mare's butt in front of his face while her upper body was dangling with the veiny cock right in front of AJ who blushed at the sight. the thick, hard stick in front of her eyes.

hades21
hades21 #14 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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The demon ignored him and buried his face between Applejack's cheeks as he inserted her long tongue into the inner reaches of her cunt. The monster's tongue runs all the way down the fleshy tunnel to the entrance of her womb, relishing Applejack's games as his walls squeeze the demon's tongue. Applejack writhed in pleasure as she felt her tongue fluttering all over her needy pussy.

The demon ignored her and buried his face between Applejack's cheeks as he inserted his long tongue into the inner reaches of her cunt. The monster's tongue runs all the way down the fleshy tunnel to the entrance of her womb, relishing Applejack's taste as her walls squeeze the demon's tongue. Applejack writhed in pleasure as she felt his tongue fluttering all over her needy pussy.

hades21
hades21 #15 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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The monster hugged his rear tighter, almost burying his head in Applejack's buttocks. For a stallion it would be suicide to be suffocated between the farmer's cheeks, it would be a pleasant death for many, but they could never count the experience of being between Applejack's buttocks. one of the elements of harmony but for the demon there was no problem, he had no nose so he could enjoy this orange ass all he wanted.

The monster hugged her rear tighter, almost burying his head in Applejack's buttocks. For a stallion it would be suicide to be suffocated between the farmer's cheeks, it would be a pleasant death for many, but they could never count the experience of being between Applejack's buttocks. one of the elements of harmony but for the demon there was no problem, he had no nose so he could enjoy this orange ass all he wanted.

hades21
hades21 #16 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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He moved her head playfully from side to side so that AJ's plump cheeks jiggled like jellies as she still pleasured the mare with her tongue. Applejack was embarrassed to see her body used in such an indecent and humiliating way, she felt like a slut right now, which was even more demeaning for someone like her.

He moved his head playfully from side to side so that AJ's plump cheeks jiggled like jello as his still pleasured the mare with his tongue. Applejack was embarrassed to see her body used in such an indecent and humiliating way, she felt like a slut right now, which was even more demeaning for someone like her.

hades21
hades21 #17 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Another orgasm came and made her cum all over the monster's face, drenched in vaginal juices but the monster never stopped, he kept playing with her pussy and kept moving her head so that her buttocks bounced.

Another orgasm came and made her cum all over the monster's face, drenched in vaginal juices but the monster never stopped, he kept playing with her pussy and kept moving his head so that her buttocks bounced.

hades21
hades21 #19 · Jun 18th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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She served as support to slow the blood that had gone to her head but she felt humiliated to lean on the monster's manhood. With half of his body resting on his cock, the farmer could feel the throbbing pulsations, the veins she could see perfectly from the position she was in, pulsing in time with the creature's heart.

She served as support to slow the blood that had gone to her head but she felt humiliated to lean on the monster's manhood. With half of his body resting on her cock, the farmer could feel the throbbing pulsations, the veins she could see perfectly from the position she was in, pulsing in time with the creature's heart.

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Z THE PONY
Z THE PONY #21 · Jun 20th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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“What?, do you want them too?, I mean, I don't think you like an old lady and a big stallion, plus the filly is too small to take your-”

Please tell me we get to see him fuck Big Mac and Spike!

V-H-SClop
V-H-SClop #22 · Jun 20th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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11615003
The monster will take them all :)

Oops door
Oops door #25 · Jun 22nd, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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The dialogue is way better now. Can’t wait for future chapters.

Deathofaking
Deathofaking #26 · Jun 22nd, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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11617191
I got you fam I'm currently editing each of the stories that he's made so check in on some of them later they might be also improved soon ish

V-H-SClop
V-H-SClop #27 · Jun 22nd, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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11617191
I will try to publish one chapter a week, I'm already working on the second chapter

Turok34
Turok34 #28 · Jun 23rd, 2023 · · 10 · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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I wish the monster pony here drag Pinkie under her bed and fuck her as a clown doll form and Luna dragged in her bed like Freddy Krueger did to Johnny but no blood fountain shoots out but a cum one instead and Luna tries to escape but is dragged back in the hole with the demons tentacle cock.

V-H-SClop
V-H-SClop #29 · Jun 23rd, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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11617667
It won't happen here and stop insisting please.

ryuyi
ryuyi #31 · Jun 23rd, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Esperemos más capítulos.

Scottish-Otter
Scottish-Otter #32 · Aug 3rd, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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When is the next update. Would love to see more of this

V-H-SClop
V-H-SClop #33 · Aug 5th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Soon, i need that my publisher comeback but i still writing more chapters for this story, I have little time to do something for myself so I hope you understand.

Ray-Felgrand
Ray-Felgrand #34 · Sep 4th, 2023 · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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Hey there! Why did you delete the second chapter? :rainbowhuh:

PuzzleMaster98
PuzzleMaster98 #35 · Sep 5th, 2023 · · · The First Conquest ·
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Very nice.

As for m/m, some leech has done some m/m stuff.

Z THE PONY
Z THE PONY #37 · Sep 5th, 2023 · · · The First Conquest ·
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You could ask TheVClaw, Storm butt, Damaged, Third Wheel ,Schorl Tourmaline, and Hardcover for some advice.

Pseudo Brony
Pseudo Brony #38 · Sep 5th, 2023 · · · The First Conquest ·
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Definitely think it could use some proofreading, but still a good chapter; wonder how the encounter with Big Mac will go. There's a lot of different ways that transformative ability could be used on him.

V-H-SClop
V-H-SClop #39 · Sep 5th, 2023 · · · The First Conquest ·
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I'll do it this weekend, I think I didn't give it the correct proofreading, thanks.

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astromormy
astromormy #41 · Dec 27th, 2023 · · · The First Conquest ·
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Any updates on the next chapter?

Oops door
Oops door #43 · February 3rd · · · Apples...Sweet Apples ·
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That cheered Applebloom up, her eyes slowly closing. The farm mare knew it was a signal to leave, she walked towards the door closing it slowly, on her way out, Applebloom woke up and under her pillow she took out a storybook and a flashlight to better see what he was reading.

You said what he was reading I think you meant she

Oops door
Oops door #44 · February 4th · · · The First Conquest ·
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Meanwhile one of the creature's hands traveled to her generous crotch tits and it didn't take long to modify them with his magic and Applejack could feel her tits tingling. She looked down to see how her udders were growing little by little, the mounds growing until they reached the ground, his nipples were fully erect.

You said his nipples I think you meant her

Oops door
Oops door #45 · February 4th · · · The First Conquest ·
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If he couldn't do anything before, what could she do now that she's out of shape? Her body was modified for this, to serve and please him, that will be her only purpose for today and the rest of her life.

You said he couldn’t do anything before I think you meant she

Oops door
Oops door #46 · February 4th · · · The First Conquest ·
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Applejack didn't care about the changes anymore, while she was already on the floor dying and gasping, she still wanted more, she wanted to be fucked forever by his new master. The beast by her side was still hard, his penis was still erect and hard as diamond, little by little his strength is recovering every time he fucks this heroine, he feels how his power is increasing which is a good sign, these ponies had truly amazing bodies and we're very fuckable, this was the path he must follow to his absolute dominance and it was obvious she wasn't going to stop with this heroine of harmony, He needed more.

Her new master

Longma-Irons
Longma-Irons #47 · March 29th · · · The First Conquest ·
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AppleJack is nothing but a cock sucker now.
An idea that I think would be amazing is this, what if her cutie mark changes to suit her Master's needs?
It could be anything like a clapping ass or maybe a image of a butt being covered in cubut to change her very purpose and destiny would be amazing

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