"There's no reason to go so fast mate, we've got all night... I just hope your little friend can keep up with me", she used her helmet to masturbate him or at least try to masturbate since her helmet was small in comparison due to the size of his cock.

You say, helmet, Twice did you mean hooves?

Most of the he her his him and she are mixed up I guess English is your first language, most likely using a gendered language and using Google translate, I’ll be deleting the other comments The story is good and so is the premise besides just the spelling errors are the only problem I see I’ll be reading the rest of the story whenever it comes out it’s good so far

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Most of the errors that you pointed out, I have already corrected them, please let me know if there is another one.

Mind telling the Artist of the Cover image, please?thank you.

Really like the premise of this story. Love how Chrysalis is treated and would love to read more about how she was captured by her master.

Just got to fix a few of the mistakes like the Her and Him mixups. If that gets fixed by a pre reader looking over the story this would be an even better story.

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I'm working on it, possibly on Friday there will be an edited version, but thanks for commenting.

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artist is called dragk

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cant wait to read where the story goes in the future.

Her prayer is interrupted when a large shadow looms over her. Applejack turns quickly to find the tip of a large, hard, veiny cock pricking his cheek. The raccoons take the opportunity to flee the scene, leaving the mare with the creature to fend for itself.

Her prayer is interrupted when a large shadow looms over her. Applejack turns quickly to find the tip of a large, hard, veiny cock pricking her cheek. The raccoons take the opportunity to flee the scene, leaving the mare with the creature to fend for itself.

The demon monster on the other hand didn't have any scratches and was already victorious sampling the sweet apple cunt with the mare's butt in front of his face while her upper body was dangling with the veiny cock right in front of AJ who blushed at the sight. the thick, hard stick in front of his eyes.

The demon monster on the other hand didn't have any scratches and was already victorious sampling the sweet apple cunt with the mare's butt in front of his face while her upper body was dangling with the veiny cock right in front of AJ who blushed at the sight. the thick, hard stick in front of her eyes.

The demon ignored him and buried his face between Applejack's cheeks as he inserted her long tongue into the inner reaches of her cunt. The monster's tongue runs all the way down the fleshy tunnel to the entrance of her womb, relishing Applejack's games as his walls squeeze the demon's tongue. Applejack writhed in pleasure as she felt her tongue fluttering all over her needy pussy.

The demon ignored her and buried his face between Applejack's cheeks as he inserted his long tongue into the inner reaches of her cunt. The monster's tongue runs all the way down the fleshy tunnel to the entrance of her womb, relishing Applejack's taste as her walls squeeze the demon's tongue. Applejack writhed in pleasure as she felt his tongue fluttering all over her needy pussy.

The monster hugged his rear tighter, almost burying his head in Applejack's buttocks. For a stallion it would be suicide to be suffocated between the farmer's cheeks, it would be a pleasant death for many, but they could never count the experience of being between Applejack's buttocks. one of the elements of harmony but for the demon there was no problem, he had no nose so he could enjoy this orange ass all he wanted.

The monster hugged her rear tighter, almost burying his head in Applejack's buttocks. For a stallion it would be suicide to be suffocated between the farmer's cheeks, it would be a pleasant death for many, but they could never count the experience of being between Applejack's buttocks. one of the elements of harmony but for the demon there was no problem, he had no nose so he could enjoy this orange ass all he wanted.

He moved her head playfully from side to side so that AJ's plump cheeks jiggled like jellies as she still pleasured the mare with her tongue. Applejack was embarrassed to see her body used in such an indecent and humiliating way, she felt like a slut right now, which was even more demeaning for someone like her.

He moved his head playfully from side to side so that AJ's plump cheeks jiggled like jello as his still pleasured the mare with his tongue. Applejack was embarrassed to see her body used in such an indecent and humiliating way, she felt like a slut right now, which was even more demeaning for someone like her.

Another orgasm came and made her cum all over the monster's face, drenched in vaginal juices but the monster never stopped, he kept playing with her pussy and kept moving her head so that her buttocks bounced.

Another orgasm came and made her cum all over the monster's face, drenched in vaginal juices but the monster never stopped, he kept playing with her pussy and kept moving his head so that her buttocks bounced.

Nice.

She served as support to slow the blood that had gone to her head but she felt humiliated to lean on the monster's manhood. With half of his body resting on his cock, the farmer could feel the throbbing pulsations, the veins she could see perfectly from the position she was in, pulsing in time with the creature's heart.

She served as support to slow the blood that had gone to her head but she felt humiliated to lean on the monster's manhood. With half of his body resting on her cock, the farmer could feel the throbbing pulsations, the veins she could see perfectly from the position she was in, pulsing in time with the creature's heart.

“What?, do you want them too?, I mean, I don't think you like an old lady and a big stallion, plus the filly is too small to take your-”

Please tell me we get to see him fuck Big Mac and Spike!

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The monster will take them all :)

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:)

I hope he knocks them up

The dialogue is way better now. Can’t wait for future chapters.

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I got you fam I'm currently editing each of the stories that he's made so check in on some of them later they might be also improved soon ish

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I will try to publish one chapter a week, I'm already working on the second chapter

I wish the monster pony here drag Pinkie under her bed and fuck her as a clown doll form and Luna dragged in her bed like Freddy Krueger did to Johnny but no blood fountain shoots out but a cum one instead and Luna tries to escape but is dragged back in the hole with the demons tentacle cock.

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It won't happen here and stop insisting please.

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Fine.

Esperemos más capítulos.

When is the next update. Would love to see more of this

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Soon, i need that my publisher comeback but i still writing more chapters for this story, I have little time to do something for myself so I hope you understand.

Hey there! Why did you delete the second chapter?

That cheered Applebloom up, her eyes slowly closing. The farm mare knew it was a signal to leave, she walked towards the door closing it slowly, on her way out, Applebloom woke up and under her pillow she took out a storybook and a flashlight to better see what he was reading.

You said what he was reading I think you meant she