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Can you give up a link to the full cover art

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My mistake, you can only choose one, sorry for not clarifying.

Ending 4: Operation Valkyrie. Supremacy, blood purity, and a Lebensborn program don't ever work and create a dictatorial failed state. And not all zebras could possibly be assholes, and not all mares could buy this incredibly simplistic "big pp make brain the dum". Either some noble and conflicted Ehud zebra would give his Eglon king the left-handed hello he deserves, or some pretended obedient Jael mare will exhaust that Sisera bastard and do what must be done with a tent peg. There will be war, of attrition, and it will not be pretty. But it will be necessary. And hopefully the zebra will help, splinter, pledge a moral reformation.

I vote for war, fierce, flaming, bloody, cruel, grim, but necessary.

Ending 1 please, too many stories without consequences

1. Would be cool to as well see Zecora discover a cure for the sex ratio discrepancy for both kingdoms.

I want ending 1!!! MAKE THE ZEBRAS AND CELESTIA PAY!!! UNLEASH MIDNIGHT SPARKLE!!!

Ending 3

Question: When the votes are tallied, will the winning choice replace the current main ending?

Thanks for story!

I believe I mentioned the same before the edit but they must have quite some body modification for cum to be able to come out of their mouths when cumming in their pussies…

Unless Anthro ponies anatomy was different from humans from the very beginning?

Have a good day!
Ending 1…

Excellent breeder story! I think your choice of endings definitely has me favoring #3 where the z's take over, but it doesn't have to be one or the other? You know, tie in Twi's need for revenge but fails because of her own deep planted desires as well as what's gestating. Just my 2c

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Tossing this idea out there for third ending and I thought it would be a pretty funny twist. Princess Celestia fuck the zebra King into submission and that's why the zebra King is so respectful to her and maybe a little bit scared.

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I must add that to the description of the fic, "Incorrect Anatomy", thanks for the reminder and I will also make a note of that mistake for a future edition of this fic to change it as there will be similar or even crazier things in the sequel.

The idea of semen coming out of Twilight's mouth came to mind from an H anime I watched a long time ago and I thought it would be fun to add it, overall I had fun with this project although I hated it at first because I wrote when I had a fever, I just wanted to finish without worrying about errors and give the anonymous user what they asked for.

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Yes... or no, maybe?
It all depends on what comes to mind personally, I wanted Twilight's revenge and originally it was going to stay as the original ending but my editor suggested two ideas to finish it: combine the 3 endings or leave it to the public vote, this with the purpose of a sequel.

With the vote I will be clear about which way to go and what things can come to my mind.

To be honest, I didn't think users would like STRIPED that much.

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Something similar had occurred to me while I was writing the fic but maybe we'll leave it for later, I'll just confirm that Celestia makes Zealous nervous.

I say to go with number one. Might be interesting to see how Twilight will show how much she "appreciates" their hospitality

Comment posted by V-H-SClop deleted Oct 9th, 2022

¡WINNER "ENDING 3: absolute zebradom"!

Sorry for the delay, I wanted to give one more day to see if the results change but people have spoken and I must obey to give them what they want. To be honest I would have liked "Ending 1" to win, I liked the idea of ​​Twilight taking revenge on the zebras just like Doom guy in Doom but I'm not complaining about the results.

The sequel to STRIPED is on the way but first I want to release a little Spin off that will run parallel to Striped 1 and I hope you can guess, which one it is with the tracks left in STRIPED.

With nothing more to say have a nice afternoon and wait for the great projects I have for you:pinkiehappy:

He repeated the last two sentences in the last chapter

Comment posted by V-H-SClop deleted Nov 25th, 2022

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I meant that if you want your own version of the story you could make it and give it the ending you wrote, since I already have the sequel written and edited, excuse my misunderstanding 🙏

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Honestly, if your idea is to have a punishment, do it however you like.

I didn't think much about this story since I just wanted to finish it and give the user what he asked for and well... there's the result, so it's up to you how you want to write your version.

The continuation is underway and I already have what the first chapter will be like, which continues the ending chosen by the users, which is the ending 3.

La opción 1 es la mejor para una secuela.
La opción 2 es mejor para un spin off.
La opción 3 solo sirve de secuela si eliminas la opción 3.

Podemos tener una precuela de Velvet y Cadence?

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