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I will honestly commend this story if it turns out it's not just stupid Celestia and evil ponies being racist against poor, abused, innocent dragons.
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While there will be blatant racism between the different races in the story it is a two way street. At the same time just because one pony A is racist it doesn't mean pony B is, and so on. I'm currently reworking and streamlining the story and plot, but I hope you will like what i do have planned
Quick writing tip: when characters address one another, put a comma before the name. Helps your readers immensely. A good showcase why is the difference between:
"I want to come inside Rainbow Dash!"
vs
"I want to come inside, Rainbow Dash!"
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Thank you very much for the advice, I appreciate it
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Unless its a clop fic.
😎
Well I caught up.
So is this going to be another story where Celestia being Celestia, gets away with genocide and is forgiven like nothing happened by the lone survivor who just goes ahead with his life like its candy and rainbows, or is this going to be one of the impossibly rare stories where Celestia actually pays for her crimes?
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Thank you for your input! I don't want to spoil anything major but I also do not want to leave that topic untouched. I've been brainstorming of a few ideas on how to implement it in a way that I think would help drive the story but haven't settled on anything concrete yet. If you are willing to throw some ideas my way I would be more than happy to hear them. I will also be more than willing to share info that has been scrapped or retconned as well. Once again thank you!
Oooof. Full name. He is in trouble~
Did Celestia just forget that she literally almost killed Gaia?
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Did you remember what you ate this day but a decade ago?
Interesting. Who would want the dragons eliminated?
Welcome, time traveler!
Wow, cashing in all those favors and didn't even have enough time to give cryptic messages.
If Luna is back, why did Celestia raise the moon?
....what are they laughing at? She just gave a greeting...?
It's quite curious Spike is apparently not under the care of Twilight. Interesting what else is alternative to the show canon.
Very strange that he's also very prejudiced. Sure the legends are true but he's had no cause to assume that, and no cause to fly off the handle in the face of her hitherto displayed cordiality. Ah well, the plot must be moved.
Mental stability drastically decreased very quickly. What the heck is going on?
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What im assuming is this was after NMM got banished. Meaning ancient times. Ponies in those times were dicks, to Luna and each other. Other races? We can assume 100% racism.
Truely an interesting story from start. Its unique, its own thing and it has so much merit to become something different from what I read. The Aesir concept as a whole is very interesting and I kinda like a story that doesn't shy away from alot of things like Ive read here. I wish more had ideas and concepts that centered around it often, especially when Dragons are involved.
Great Work!
vile
Ah.
Celestia believes that a mind is a puzzle, that she can take the ‘right pieces’ and make everything fit.
Thats not how minds work. A brain isnt a puzzle, its an amalgamation of mass, energy and memories at best, and a conundrum wrapped in confusion baked by the heat of experience at worst.
Wait i mixed those two up.
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Fixed! Thank you for catching that.
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Thank you!!!
Spike being turned on by another dragon!?!?
The audacity!!!!
Insert media.tenor.com/3jLoELO7OuYAAAAd/oops-ooh.gif
Yea. This is a much more coherent and understandable plot.
Thank you for fixing it and sorry for the bother.
found this story randomly and much to my confusion I had already read a few chapters. only realize that these chapters are from 2022 and you only started uploading again in 2023.
well time to reread it.
Ooooooo that's a twist heh
Inserts " What a twist" meme here---》
Spike fancies his aunt xD hahaha
One second she's on par with Celestia and next she's not.
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Normally she is. However multiple wards have been placed over Gaia to prevent her from reaching her full power. Most are placed within the two bands "gifted" to her by Celestia but many more are placed passively over her body. This will be touched on more in future chapters, but I promise this was done intentionally.
Thank you for you comment
God Damn! This chapter was awesome don't wanna drop spoilers but DAMN!
I ENJOY WHERE THIS IS GOING!!
This romance is much better than the previous iteration.
Good job 👍
Get to the clop already!!!
Ha spike you dumbass
Alright im clueless... how does parliament here work? Google is calling me stupid for being poorly educated in the American system...😑
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I'm American. and in that regard...... Fuck if I know lol
I admit I did minimal research in how the house of Parliament and Commons and all others function as in the end I do not plan on getting into the meat of politics. I plan on going over the most basic aspects and for all intents and purposes what I wrote down is not all that accurate. The biggest point I wanted to get across is the following three main things...
Warning this is a minor spoiler but will also be the main focus of the next chapter so keep that in mind.
1. Though Equastria is a Dyarchy the sisters do not souly hold the power over the country like a true monarchy or authoritarian like set up. Equestria is more of a rudimentary Republic / monarchy hybrid like system that took almost all of the pros and cons of each respectively. A system that worked well enough when Celestia was in charge by herself as Cadence was never really seen as anything more than a figure head and political icon in both the views of the common people and on paper.
2. There is a major disconnect between the crown, the upper crust / nobles, the politicians themselves, and even the common people of Equestria. A disconnect that is growing bigger by the day and is turning to violent methods to try and gain the upper hand / hoof.
3. Lastly it was meant to show the inefficiencies of the Equestrian government after the revelation that Celestia has lied since well before the founding of the nation itself. Though it wasn't brought up directly in this chapter and is like previously stated the focus of the next, many of the opposition stems from this distrust. What other things are being hidden from us? Can the royals be trusted at all? And is Celestia being a dragon / Jotuun the only thing being hidden from us.
Huh. Nice one, moonflank.
Sun, you mean
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Thank you! I wrote this chapter on my phone lol. auto correct has never been my friend when it counts >_>
I'll fix that error right away
I find it interesting to use paw instead of claws, though i guess technically claws don't actually mean the whole foot and are frequently used in that way for clawed creatures
"I wish i were" would work if Gaia had said "You're lying" because of the tenses, but due to the mismatch of tenses the lines you've used feel very out of place
You accidentally capitalized the 2nd word of this sentence aswell as the first
The use of Nordic mythological terms is actually rather interesting, and given some of the things said I’m wondering if this all somehow relates to actual Norse myth beyond just the use of those names
Hehe Twilight's not gonna be happy but who cares
okay i am liking this story.
wonder when RD will lay her first egg?
I’m enjoying the story well enough but this AU seems awfully strange. Chrysalis is a good bug, no twilight around but there is a spike. The setting confuses me.