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KlonRay


Who am I? I am an ordinary person who likes to dream! That's why I sit and read fan fiction ALL THE TIME! I'm not a pervert, I'm just looking for romance with more "explicit" scenes

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Interesting story so far

I have to ask but who did the cover art or did you make it?

I hope it stocks with the changeling body this seems badass

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Unfortunately, I don't know how to draw (you can tell my drawing level by my avatar). I have combined publicly available images in Photoshop.
I had an idea for the cover, and I wanted to recreate it in any way

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Gotcha in that case very well done.

But yeah agreed. My drawing probably way worse than yours.


But I have the same idea for a cover image for my story but first I have to re-learn how to photoshop.



But question, have you ever of the the game Tom Clancy the division?

This is absolute fucking gas please keep going i am so invested ha

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I haven't played such a game yet. I don't really play online games, I feel like a weakling in them

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Well, you don’t have to play PVP in the division. You could just play the campaign.

I like this story thank you

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I would like to, but there is a problem here, I can't speak English fluently.:facehoof: I understand most of the speech, but I can't speak. I'm sorry:fluttercry:

in to chapter 2 going to stop here. you have a good story in the making but there is several conflikting wording that make it some what anoying to translate to read. i would recomend go over the chapters and edit them or have some folks to proof read to point out errors.

good luck with the story and keep at it

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I am grateful for your kind words and regret that I have poor writing skills
In the future I will try to correct my mistakes (or hope that to me will help with this)
And thank you for seeing the potential in my story:twilightsmile:

If this story only takes place in the Equestria Girls world, then why is there a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic tag?

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The fact is that I decided to start the story from afar, until the moment of "Equestria Girls" and show the whole world beyond the main characters. But when the main character swims to Manehattan, there he will be met with "Ghhh" and "Ghhh".

And as for the tag, I decided to add it because of the connection with this world (the "little tricky question" in the first chapters, in which first world did it appear?) And in the future he will be there

Thanks for attention. Further - more:raritywink:

I am looking for volunteers who will help with the translation or editing of this fanfiction (Russian-> English). I will be very grateful for this help

If you need help that badly, then shouldn’t you make this a lot bigger?

I tried to enjoy this, but everyone treating him like shit and just tormenting him for no apparent reason getting fucking ridiculous. I mean, if there were at least some reasoning behind it plot wise, then I could understand. But so far nothing at all has been shown in that regard. It is just adding unnecessary conflict for the sake of adding conflict, no real rhyme or reasoning for it. It is grating on the nerves.

What do you mean by “a voice-over character“?

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It was implied that the person was tired of being a supporting character (translation difficulties, I'll fix it now)

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