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Ghost56
just a spartan and some testing his reading stills and seeing if my story have good plot to them. Could use some criticisms
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Hmm seems interesting.
Allrighty, lets see where this tale goes...
Into my library you go!
11620569
Well thank you for that.
Thanks for the update!
11657366
Do you enjoy this story? Because I still find it mediocre
11659159
I use to troll wattpad and read stories there. I have literally seen stories that have gone from near illegible dumpster fires to eventually just being updates about the authors personal life trying to make her boyfriend jealous by sleeping with other men and asking commenters for their opinion on whether she was in the right or not. And don’t even get me started on the absolute mountain of self insert rejected and abused male reader clones of literally every fandom that exists on there where every character is named (Y/N) (L/N) which means your name last name because the authors can’t think of an actual name for there character.
So yeah is the story some masterpiece? No
Are there grammar errors that are a bit too common? Maybe
Can the previous errors be fixed? Yup.
Is the author at least putting some effort into the work so it doesn’t look like it was written by a 7 year old? Seems like it.
And as long as that stays this case I will continue to read it. And comment thanks for the chapter.
11659490
Well thank you, I have lost my older brother and I wrote to help deal with it as writing is something I enjoy if you look at my post you will see I almost gave up when I lost him but I didn't and you saying its not completely shit means a lot.
11659552
No problem trust me I’ve seen awful stories, this is just a new story with some grammar mistakes if you choose to continue those mistakes will go away with experience. I’m also sorry for your loss and I hope my support helps however small it may be.
Thanks for the update!
11672651
Happy to update
Thanks for the chapter 😊
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update!
You took a lot of inspiration from hardcore Henry
...now I'm not saying this is bad, cause it's not. I like this story and feel it has a lot of potential. But, this kinda feels rushed in a sense.
11750021
Kinda is because I want to write this story but what I end up do is coming up with several chapters and story points even when I am barely at the beginning you feel me.
11750066
Totally get it, I'm kinda doing the same with my own story and I just feel bad to make everyone wait cause I can't move one part of the story along.