• Member Since 1st Sep, 2021
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Ghost56


just a spartan and some testing his reading stills and seeing if my story have good plot to them. Could use some criticisms

Comments ( 15 )

Is this meant to be a crossover?

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No this character is an oc I made that can travel through the multiverse of comics and tv so

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When is the next chapter?

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When I have time to write as I am studying restaurants and how to work in them

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Ah gotcha.

Well I wish you luck then my friend.

And eagerly wait for the next chapter when it’s releases.

But please take your time there is no rush

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Thank you my friend as studing is going to be hell not going to lie

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Can’t agure with that.

Why do I feel like celestia has feelings for him?

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No just that she saw the mass amount of blood all over the place. That would make any one worried

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Understandable.

Celestia is not going to take his weapons and guns away and destroying them right… right?!

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Maybe only the next chapter will tell

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Wait follow up question is their a pony going to be falling in love with him or something?

Also I wish him luck on *gulp* heat season with the poines and if he needs evac or a bunker than I’ll be happy to help.


Besides SHD agent standing by ready to evac

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He can open portals and I would do the whole falling in love thing if I knew what I could do

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I could give some tips if the need arises.

And if you have time or if you want to can you check out my story and give some feedback of what you think of it so far in the comments section.

Well if you have time to or want to of course

The story is very badass. I mean Isaac and this mysterious brother of his . Battling different dimensions. Bro you made a kick-ass story

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